Salted Chocolate - Comments, page 2

aprilm405 (100)

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UPDATE SOON
i love this! :D

July 9th, 2010 at 07:45pm

BlackAndRED. (100)

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another great update ! (:

July 7th, 2010 at 01:26am

Liars' Pants On Fire (210)

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The second half was very adorable. I smiled like a crazed person the entire time, I loved it so much! [:

July 3rd, 2010 at 06:33pm

mustachemannn (100)

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YUM!!!
I love it!
I love how she's just an ordinary girl and she's very humble, unlike her sister.
PLEASE keep ke updated, while I go dip my face in a box of Godiva :)

July 2nd, 2010 at 08:36pm

Natalie!! (250)

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This sounds like it's gonna end up really cute =) I'm kinda excited now <3

July 2nd, 2010 at 08:26pm

BlackAndRED. (100)

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i love this story already (:
i crave chocolate now :P
cant wait until another update xD

July 2nd, 2010 at 08:20pm

aubs (420)

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Both chapter one and chapter two were magnificent!

But he didn't embarrass her by backing down. Instead he bowed at the waist, took her hand in his and kissed it. His eyes met hers, and he stared at her for what seemed like ages, his lips still on her hand.
I think this would have to be my favorite part in chapter two.

You have really set up a wonderful story here! The description is wonderful! And I love how you keep the story like the movie. I am subscribing to see where this goes!

July 2nd, 2010 at 07:38pm

Liars' Pants On Fire (210)

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:D! Yay! I can't wait to find out what happens next!

July 1st, 2010 at 08:39pm