Your Tongue Taste of Cyanide - It Taste Like a Summerfling - Comments

  • AvoidMeLikeThePlague

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    Aww, they're going to go on a date!

    I didn't think the mom was a bitch in the first place,

    it's nice to see her accept Cat and Whip's relationship.

    More soon.
    January 30th, 2008 at 11:18pm
  • Unicorn.

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    This made me smile the minute I saw "Hello , You are receiving this email because you are subscribed to "Your Tongue Taste Of Cyanide - It Taste Like A Summerfling" story. This story has been updated" in my inbox. I needed that smile, so thank you.

    I was also grinning through the whole chapter.

    Now I will go read "Virtue to Vice". Bye.
    January 30th, 2008 at 09:30pm
  • boychild.

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    blitzkriegBOOM:
    *Squeee*
    Loved this chapter.

    Does your dad know what you printed? :D
    He read the title and was like "Oh God, why can't you watch porno as a normal kid instead if reading it?" >_<
    I told him that it was better to read and prove that you have some braincells than stare at a screen like a drooling heap. :D
    January 29th, 2008 at 09:12pm
  • blitzkriegBOOM

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    *Squeee*
    Loved this chapter.

    Does your dad know what you printed? :D
    January 28th, 2008 at 08:13am
  • bloodravyn

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    LOVE
    January 27th, 2008 at 02:26am
  • Unicorn.

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    Ahh, you pretty pretty pretty person who's nice enough to make my pretty pretty pretty Saturday by updating this pretty pretty pretty story when I'm pretty pretty pretty sick.

    That's twelve pretties in one sentence.
    January 26th, 2008 at 09:20pm
  • Xlindzasaurus_rexX

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    Hahahah!!! The end was friggin' funny.
    Ummm, how do I think it'll end?...
    Mm, maybe they go back to Sweden and the live together. But that sounds not like something you would do.
    I'm thinkin' somebody gets hurt. Or dies. Ugh, that would suck miserably. (((Not the story, the actual event.)))

    <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
    January 24th, 2008 at 11:19pm
  • blitzkriegBOOM

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    *Drooling profusely*
    Shit, man, that was hot. O_O

    Ten minutes later he was fucking me against the wall in a restroom stall.

    Yeah, it really took a lot to seduce him


    LOL! That got me laughing so much...

    How I think it'll end?
    I seriously have no clue. I'm reading for the fun of reading, and I'm not guessing about the ending. :P
    January 24th, 2008 at 09:10am
  • CagedBarbWire

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    Great add!
    A cute one aswell.

    hmmm the ending..?
    I would of said that Whip has to go back home but theyve grown so attached, that Jenny lets Cat stay with Whip.
    Or Vice Versa.
    Or amybe they move in together.

    No idea.
    January 24th, 2008 at 07:11am
  • Unicorn.

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    Cat and/or Whip dies.

    Noo, I just want someone to die. Because I like it when they're miserable ^_^

    Whip and Cat get together. Because that's just obvious.

    No.

    They go home, meet again, and Kitty joins DS.
    January 23rd, 2008 at 09:14pm
  • AvoidMeLikeThePlague

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    Seven chapters in and

    I'm really enjoying the story.

    Then you remind me that eventually it has to end.

    It's sad, really.
    January 23rd, 2008 at 09:20am
  • MGMT

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    Yeah, so this story?
    I Fucking Love It :]
    January 21st, 2008 at 03:45am
  • z3ez

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    Hehe I got your second page. =p
    I'm gonna name it Honkee Magoo,
    I've always wanted a dog named that but my mom said she'd just call it Honkee all of the time and it might offend white people even though she is right. >__>
    Okay I got off subject. XD
    January 20th, 2008 at 06:13pm
  • z3ez

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    If you would have waited just for a little bit I sent it back to you. =p
    Loser.
    I think it's about time you send me some more, and I won't be such a lazy ass and forget this time. ^^
    January 20th, 2008 at 06:12pm
  • Unicorn.

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    John's gay. Yesyes.

    Bad bad bad baaad Whip...

    Why didn't he just gently push him or something...?
    January 19th, 2008 at 04:02pm
  • CagedBarbWire

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    gaaaaaaaaah that last chapter was cool.
    Bad Whip! Hitting Eric like that!
    Trust people...
    January 19th, 2008 at 12:11am
  • Xlindzasaurus_rexX

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    -new reader-
    *hearts it*
    Whip, you meanie! Not hitting (Kitty)Cat!
    But it's better now, 'cause they're talking. They've never really talked before have they...?

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    January 18th, 2008 at 06:13pm
  • Loves Ray Guns.

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    No, that's wrong! Why would Whip ever want to hit little Cat?!!!
    Anyway, that shocked me a bit but i'm over it...I think. Mhm.
    Nicely written as usual. (I like Cat's uncle he seems cool.)

    Can't wait for the next one.
    January 18th, 2008 at 02:07pm
  • bloodravyn

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    MEAN WHIP FOR HITTING PRETTY CAT!
    January 18th, 2008 at 01:11pm
  • blitzkriegBOOM

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    =DD
    This chapter had me grinning the entire time. =D
    January 17th, 2008 at 12:20am