Mind Games - Comments

omg. please update! I'm dyinggggg. I need this in my life!!!!!

Update update update :D <3

Please update I love this so much and want to see how it will turn out.

PLEASE update! This is great as always! :D <3

omg! u should continue with the sequel i love it!!!!

Update please

Oh man, I knew you changed the title!! I', pretty sure Leo is running to Edward and Carlisle right now, which will lead to a major vocal smackdown later (because Edward is just so classy). And I don't know why, but I miss Emmett - he should make a random appearance somewhere soon :P

I quite like the change.
Update soon!
Did wittle Leo soil himself seeing Damon?
Hahaa.

Good lord this girl needs to grow a backbone!! I mean obviousky there is something between herself and Damon, and anyone would be freaked out if they dreampt about someone they've never met and then they suddenly found themselves going to school with them. But COME ON she is half-vampire for crying out loud; obviously she knows there is something not human about Damon. Gosh use your brain Nessie!!! Can't wait to see what sticky situation she's gotten herself into now...keep it up!!

Good move Nessie! Good move! Hahaa.
Well, slightly stupid but good. Hahaa.
It would be hillarious if Nessie brought him home saying, "Uh..this is Damon. He's a..friend from school."
The look on everyone's face would be fricken priceless.
Hahaa.
Update soon, hun!!
:D

oh my damn. oh my damn. oh my damn. oh my damn...... DAMON!
haha I can't believe he's at the school.
update soon?

Totally agree with BloodyBlackRose13, in fact, I couldn't have put it better myself lol - that's pretty much the gist of what I was going to say...sooooo, uhm, yeah.....keep updating?? :P

P.s I guess I should now apologize for this pointless comment, next time should be better!!

Ah shit..this isn't going to end well for someone.
Damon in Nessie's school...yeah, they're all fucked sideways.
Hahaa.
Update soon!!
(:

I voted for Damon like seven fucking times, man. Hahaa.
I quite like Nessie's POVs; they show how she feels in all of this coming straight from her.
And I'm kind of with needxmorexparamore;; if I was Nessie, I would bust down the fricken door demanding who the fuck Damon Salvatore is and whip any ass nescesary if they refused to tell me.
But that's just me.
Hahaa.
Update soon, hun!
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Ugh why doesn't she just friggin ask them who Damon is!?! I mean things would be a lot easier if she would just grow a pair, just saying :P Anyways, I can't bring myself to vote for either one of those guys, especially since I like their competition better, Stephan and Jacob are both hot pieces of man candy that I would much rather take a bite out of :) But um, on the POV issue, I personally prefer first person, because then we get to know their thoughts, and it kind of makes it seem like the audience is experiencing it. Not to mention you won't have to write as much "he said" or "she thought" - I personally hate that, it takes away from the story if there's too much of it...soo distracting!! Okay well this comment is hellishly long, so I'm going to roll on out of here!! Thanks for the shout out and keep up the bomb writing, it makes my day! PEACE!!

ewww a heart? personally, i would have fainted.

can't wait to see who it's from! perhaps damon?

Well...ummm...I'm a little speechless - a heart, really!?!?! That's awkward, how is she going to explain that one to everybody?? Anyways, it would be even more screwed up if the heart weren't from Damon, oooh and how is she going to discover that Damon is real...I hope she freaks out; This is going to be lots of fun, I can already tell. Update soon girly, I cannot WAIT for the next one!

If I opened the box and saw a bloody heart, I would be thinking the following;;
"What bastard is this sick and twisted, to do something like this?"
It would fucking haunt me, man. Hahaa.
Update soon missy!!
(:

Rad!, Update Soon?!?

That's gross!, A Heart?!

Bring on the pack!! jk Now we're getting to the good stuff, Damon is about to make Nessie pay, YAAAAY!!! It sucks to be her lol