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  • RKOsgirl4ever92

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    hope to read more soon!
    May 18th, 2011 at 12:07am
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    AHH!!!! I LOVE YOU! And them kids... (the newbies) need to be taught a lesson... and little Will makes me smile, he is so adorable. Great updated, and kind of glad it was this one and not Bri, lol.:)
    May 17th, 2011 at 08:45am
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    I totally just saw that this was updated. Dude, I would beat the bro's ass for touching her... asshole.! Anyways, great chappie. :) Take your time, I know how busy you are!!!
    March 21st, 2011 at 02:31pm
  • RKOsgirl4ever92

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    great update!
    hope to read more soon!
    March 18th, 2011 at 04:16pm
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    Ahem miss Scott, no ma'am.... Jeff better be ok, dang it. Great update though. It was awesome and last night I am still overwhelmed about.
    February 23rd, 2011 at 03:10am
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    great update!
    February 22nd, 2011 at 09:57pm
  • RKOsgirl4ever92

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    great update
    February 17th, 2011 at 04:28am
  • ShadowsFiction

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    Dude I am so excited..... come on, don't make me wait forever! I want to see Riley beat some Bella ass!!!!! This chapter was just amazing.... I am in love again!!!!
    February 16th, 2011 at 05:55am
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    awesome update
    are jeff and riley going to have more kids?
    hope to read more soon!
    February 7th, 2011 at 10:54pm
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    This was amazing. And the part with Riley and Chasey made me sad... but a good sad. Hope that Chasey comes to terms with what had happened. Still like 'a proud aunt' when I see any of the kids sticking up for themeselves. It swells my heart and makes me extrememly happy. And your know I will write anything for you, I love to write and having someone to write for makes it even better :). Great update sweeite, heart it to pieces!
    February 7th, 2011 at 03:03pm
  • RKOsgirl4ever92

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    they are going to be in some trouble!
    hope to read more soon!
    January 31st, 2011 at 05:45am
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    SCORE for Kylie; it's about fucking time she stood up for herself... I loved this hardcore... and the beginning, hilarious... I seen it happening as I was reading it.
    January 31st, 2011 at 05:14am
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    i am glad that Kylie talked in court!hope to read more soon!
    January 28th, 2011 at 05:07am
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    Amazing, I was tearing up, not in a bad way, but in a good way. I was like a proud mama hearing Kylie speak up :) This was just... the breakdown was neccisary, I could see it happening. Brilliancy (Is that even a word?) :)
    January 27th, 2011 at 09:44pm
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    This was really awesome, exactly what I expected it to be. *not saying they all never are* I wouldn't have been able to catch the emotions that you had. And you're welcome, and I like doing them :) And I still want to read the alt ending but I am slightly scared to. Can't wait to see where this goes and what happens.
    January 14th, 2011 at 01:39am
  • RKOsgirl4ever92

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    they really need to get Jeff out of jail
    they can prove it was protection
    hope to read more soon!
    January 13th, 2011 at 10:32pm
  • ShadowsFiction

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    YOU!!!!! When I started reading this I wanted to come to, *I forgot where you live :(* and kick your ass.... And then I was like, "hell yes, Ron is dead." but then I remembered, "JEFF!!!! NO!!!!" and now I am like. "he deserved it,". Great chappie lovely, can't wait to see what happens next!
    January 12th, 2011 at 07:47am
  • RKOsgirl4ever92

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    i am sure jeff can get out of jail!
    hope to read more soon!
    January 12th, 2011 at 04:14am
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    awesome update!
    thats sad they chase had to abort her baby!
    hope to read more soon!
    January 4th, 2011 at 04:32am
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    First off, WOW! Three updates in a row. Nice! And now, I was totally crying during Chasey's stuff. Making the choice to abort your child for medical reasons is hard and not something I wish on anyone. The points they made were valid and it still made me sad. And then I started reading about Ron and then the 'dream' I was getting sad again, I thought you were adding another twist in there.... and then I seen it was a dream, I wonder what Jeffro will do. Great chappie love, :)
    January 4th, 2011 at 02:46am