AHH!!!! I LOVE YOU! And them kids... (the newbies) need to be taught a lesson... and little Will makes me smile, he is so adorable. Great updated, and kind of glad it was this one and not Bri, lol.:)
I totally just saw that this was updated. Dude, I would beat the bro's ass for touching her... asshole.! Anyways, great chappie. :) Take your time, I know how busy you are!!!
Dude I am so excited..... come on, don't make me wait forever! I want to see Riley beat some Bella ass!!!!! This chapter was just amazing.... I am in love again!!!!
This was amazing. And the part with Riley and Chasey made me sad... but a good sad. Hope that Chasey comes to terms with what had happened. Still like 'a proud aunt' when I see any of the kids sticking up for themeselves. It swells my heart and makes me extrememly happy. And your know I will write anything for you, I love to write and having someone to write for makes it even better :). Great update sweeite, heart it to pieces!
SCORE for Kylie; it's about fucking time she stood up for herself... I loved this hardcore... and the beginning, hilarious... I seen it happening as I was reading it.
Amazing, I was tearing up, not in a bad way, but in a good way. I was like a proud mama hearing Kylie speak up :) This was just... the breakdown was neccisary, I could see it happening. Brilliancy (Is that even a word?) :)
This was really awesome, exactly what I expected it to be. *not saying they all never are* I wouldn't have been able to catch the emotions that you had. And you're welcome, and I like doing them :) And I still want to read the alt ending but I am slightly scared to. Can't wait to see where this goes and what happens.
YOU!!!!! When I started reading this I wanted to come to, *I forgot where you live :(* and kick your ass.... And then I was like, "hell yes, Ron is dead." but then I remembered, "JEFF!!!! NO!!!!" and now I am like. "he deserved it,". Great chappie lovely, can't wait to see what happens next!
First off, WOW! Three updates in a row. Nice! And now, I was totally crying during Chasey's stuff. Making the choice to abort your child for medical reasons is hard and not something I wish on anyone. The points they made were valid and it still made me sad. And then I started reading about Ron and then the 'dream' I was getting sad again, I thought you were adding another twist in there.... and then I seen it was a dream, I wonder what Jeffro will do. Great chappie love, :)