Yay!!! Another chapter! I can't wait for the yule ball! :) Thought i'd tell you; this story is pretty original for a fanfic, you know the whole, her being in beauxbatons. It's awesome :D
Okay, I've never commented, that makes me feel bad. I absolutely LOVE this! I also love that everytime I check up on it, there is at least one new chapter :) So, keep up the amazing work.
Thank you sooo much for the fast update!!! I'mma loving this new update! The ending of it was pretty damn awesome. Well, anyway, looking forward to the next one!!!
I love how often you update. You missed a few words (two or three) in this chapter and the place where Moody's yelling had me confused until I re-read it. Twice. It's not very obvious who he yells at, at first ^^;
I totally love this, it's really awesome! ^^ I was a little bit worried when i read the cousins bit, but it's all good now. And update would be super! Cannot wait for the yule ball bit and the whole starting of the triwizard tournament. Also, you spelt excited wrong. But yeah, totally awesome!!! I've subscribed and i'm waiiitttiiinnnggg!!! x
...Wait I made the right connection now. No Bellatrix, just Rodolphus' brother, who married Alice's mother. Okay, got it. (Though, strictly speaking, they aren't cousins then, are they? They wouldn't be from the Danish definition at least ^^; )
Mm, more plot twists (though wouldn't that make her mother Bellatrix Lestrange and thereby putting her in Azkaban? Rodolphus wasn't in it alone) I think Alice forgives him a bit too easily too, though it goes along well with the start of the argument, so that's all good. I'm not too fond of the place where you step in and tells us what Draco is thinking/why he is behaving that way ("...Draco expected any girl to fall for empty words."); it makes the narrator suddenly very obvious. But... Update?
Thought i'd tell you; this story is pretty original for a fanfic, you know the whole, her being in beauxbatons. It's awesome :D