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  • nicholas joseph;

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    D':
    Awhhh.
    Poor things.
    -hugs-
    <3
    January 1st, 2011 at 11:33pm
  • Deleted forever

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    i think this chapter is the cutest thing i've read in a long time :).
    It was adorable how nervos alex was proposing!, and all Jack could say was " I need to call my mum" - epic line. just epic.
    can't wait till it goes back to the present day to see what happenes between the two boys and where there relationship will go :)
    yet again another amazing update...update again soon please? for me ;) lol
    December 27th, 2010 at 07:14pm
  • No Tomorrow

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    YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!!!!
    I'm sooooo happy Jack said yes =] (if you couldn't guess lol)
    loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one!
    December 27th, 2010 at 06:31pm
  • I.want.2.be.Immortal

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    okay, next chapter. im ready for the sad and bad stuff. =D
    December 27th, 2010 at 05:42am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    -squeals-
    That.Was.So.Cute.
    :3
    <333333333
    December 27th, 2010 at 04:15am
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    you're trying to make me cry!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    That was just soo beautiful!!!!! And they are just soo cute and I just don't understand why you would make them sooo freaking happy and then crush the happy! DX!! AHHH!!!
    That was really funny at the end though. haha.
    December 27th, 2010 at 03:24am
  • trixcereal

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    "didn't know he was so vocal in bed"
    fucking hilarious.
    That was hottt and sweet
    kinda like the powepuff girls in a way.
    anyways, i love anything you write.
    Thanks for updating (:
    Happy latee holidaysss
    December 27th, 2010 at 01:37am
  • Breepocket

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    Lovedddddddd this chapter so much
    December 27th, 2010 at 01:11am
  • n.oxious

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    THIS IS SO CUTE!!!
    Fiancé
    EEP!!!
    tht was smelly cute
    hehehe
    hot
    kinky
    boy sex
    loveeeeee
    lolls
    poor Alex
    lolls
    "I didnt know he was so vocal in bed"
    cracked me up
    can't wait for the next update
    December 26th, 2010 at 11:03pm
  • Katiemacx14

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    Awwwww. I wuvvvv this.
    More soon? :D
    December 26th, 2010 at 10:45pm
  • isles and glaciers

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    Alex needs to stop being such a slut D:
    I feel so bad for Jack, how he keeps just being pushed aside when there's someone to flirt with.
    December 21st, 2010 at 07:43am
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    you know... this gets more and more heartbreaking when i think back to the first chapter and then i read about how freaking adorable they are.
    This is just really not a good thing at all.. i need to not read at this time of night too though...
    :( Poor Jack. He just wants his Alex... and his Alex is disappearing. :( Sad. :(
    December 20th, 2010 at 10:34am
  • n.oxious

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    asses
    tts so cute
    poor Jacky
    it pains me to know tht Alex keeps hurting him
    December 20th, 2010 at 02:21am
  • heyJAYhey

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    D'aww, this chapter was cute :D
    I mean, I feel awful for Jack, because obviously Alex isn't learning his lesson, but it's still cute to hear Alex reassure him =]
    Love this story!!
    December 19th, 2010 at 11:45pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    AHHHH :DDDD
    December 19th, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • No Tomorrow

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    I kinda love this!!!
    It's so sad seeing the downward spiral :(
    more soon please?
    November 30th, 2010 at 12:17am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    Awhhhh,
    Jalex cuddle timeeeee :3
    <3333
    November 28th, 2010 at 11:46pm
  • Deleted forever

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    i got goosebumps reading this chapter XD.
    it was so cute, yet quite heartbreaking at how much their relationship has changed.
    I swear, you are one of the most talented writers, and literally know how to get to me lol.

    And for the moment that was all Jack needed. Just to know that Alex did love him and that at this moment he was there with him. - i absolutely loved these lines, i can't wait for more!!
    November 28th, 2010 at 07:13pm
  • n.oxious

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    awwwww
    this was cute
    but I feel rly sry 4 jack
    I hope things get bttr
    update soon please
    November 28th, 2010 at 03:54am
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    They're just soo cutely adorable!!!
    Jack should really tell him though, it's just not good to keep things bottled up like that...
    And Alex does kinda need to get over himself... Jack needs some loving. :D
    November 28th, 2010 at 03:09am