Unconditional, Unoriginal - Comments

oh noo!!, it was all going great for them. :(
Im sad for both of them! I hope nothing bad happens. But I honestly cant wait for the next update!

AHH!! They're soo cute!! Stop it!!! DX!!!!
You can't ruin their cuteness! It's not allowed! I.. AHHH!!! DX!!!!

jkslfks control yourself zack!
I love this story :D I'm sorry I've been such a shit commenter -- I'm gonna get better, I promise!!

Uh-oh...
Zacky don't hurt him too badly. D:

This one was sad D:
Alex, you slut!

D:
no no no no no
no
this is not happening
he did not just do tht
ugh
this isn't helping
sob sniff sniff sob
update sob soon sob please sob

OH MY GOD! what are you doing! you can't just,..
ugh, Fuck you Alex, fuck with a rake!

so more of this would be greatly appreciated =]

That was so sweet (:
Those boys are so made for each other.

Aww that last chapter was so cute.

your alivee!!!
Kidding! :)
that was beautiful :), it totally contrasts with what has been happening to them recently!
Im telling you I feel like crying it was that nice, but also because I have a gut feeling when it goes back to present day, something awful is going to happen to them! :'(. Please tell me Iam wrong!!.
update again soon please :)

Awww!! awesome adorableness!!! that was so sweet and adorable and AWWWW!!!!!

-cooes-
NAWHHHHHH ^_________^
<33333333

awwwww
this chapter was sook cute
Alex is jus adorable
man
I wish he wuxnt hve upset jack
nd the wudnt hve had this fight

oh my god! I almost want to rant for waiting so long, but how could I do that with this beautiful Chapter you just presented, just oh my god! MORE!! :3

aww sweet!
more soon!

I really love your story :)
It is very original, keep up the good work :).
but I dont know why I have a gut feeling that maybe Jack will leave Alex for a little while?? :S
please update soon.

Poor Jacky didn't get to cum :( haha

awww, that was cute, but all this is flash backs, I hope that it will go back to real time and then they fix the problem, please?

bad alex. that was stupid.
I'm glad that they're all okay though... Alex should probably change his number though Girls are scary.