Out of Element - Comments

So, I just spent a good amount of my morning reading this. I have to say, it was quite amazing. I really loved it. I honestly wanted to jump into the story and strangle Johnny for the way he overreacted, but it's alright. You are an amazing writing. Keep doing what you are doing.
Now, off to read the sequel. (: ♥

D: D:
I think I just died inside. DIED I TELL YOU.
I'm extremely sad and mad ish and sad and SAD.
Meh. :'(
At least tell me we get to know who she ends up with in the sequel?
I loved this story <3 Even is it made me really HAAKFKAIEFIAKWJALDICJALSIEOF of you know what I mean.
<3

Is it bad that I'd love to see her with Keith.
I've fallen in love with that guy, I really have, then again, this story have lead for me to love Johnny just a bit more than I already did, even when he was being a prick and drinking like a mofo and picking up chicks instead of being his understandable self and you know, talk to her about it. Men...

Anyways. I really loved the ending. I read it earlier and the prologue to the follow up, I just didn't get a chance to comment and I actually wanted to drop a comment. So here it is. My comment.

Point is I love this story and I'm gonna re-read it just 'cause I can.
I loved the ending, because it wasn't Johnny bursting through the front door and grabbing her, pulling her into a kiss and apologizing (although that would have been good too).
I love it, just 'cause I've loved this entire story, plot twists and all... I knew Keith was courting her... I knew it.

I'm just gonna go drop a comment on the sequel and then sit here and wait for an update.

I'm on team Matt! Buuuut, team Vienna seems pretty cool, too. Ahahaa.

Anywho, I loved this! I can't believe it's over. Ugh!
Thank god there is a sequel. I would have died if there wouldn't have been. This story had to be the most amazin' ever. Other than When the wind blows. :D

I shall comment with my extreme distaste now.
She cannot end up with Keith. >:[
I mean, of course she won't. (: I know she has to go back to Johnny, right?
RIGHT.
Lol, great update. Can't wait for the sequel! (:

I liked the end. It fit well with the emotions Vienna's going through and everything that's happened. Not sure that I want her giving Kieth a shot, but she's right, he does deserve it. I'm excited for the next one :) though my favorite story is now over which bums me out :/ Great work though! <3

loved the update!

Team Keith......

Okay, since you have like one chapter left on this.
I'd like to drop a comment, since I've been a silent reader for quite some time now.
First time I found this, I read up to chapter 31 in one day
This is the best Johnny fic I've ever read and I love it so much, I'll probably re-read it all when it's over. I love the twists and the drama and the cuteness and how I picture Johnny punching Brian. Best. Thing. Ever. Although I love Bri...

Every chapter I've read, even if they were short compared to the usual or longer, even when you can tell it was at least 75% filler than anything... I still loved every one of them. I even started reading the other Brian and Paisley story... I didn't get the chance to read all the posted chapters, but I noticed you deleted it. I guess the sequel to this is just it right... which I will read of course.

But, yeah, anyways... I'm totally team Matt and Jimmy, yes, both... and I refuse to choose between them.

And because well, as was stated above:
Plus everyone (Brian, Vee, Brian, Johnny, did a mention Brian?) are being douches.
DOUCHES I TELL YOU!

TEAM ZACKY!
Cause he's one sexy mother fucker. (; Lol
Okay, but in all honesty, with this story, I think it would be SO FREAKING EPIC if she ended up with Brian. You know why? Because NO ONE WOULD SUSPECT IT!! And then everyone would be spazzing! Like, "What the hell just happened there?!" And then it would cause mega drama! Muahahahaha!
I'm sorry.
*Takes deep breath*
I'm going to calm down now.
Great update! I can't wait to see what happens! (:

PleasePlease make a second story in johnny and vee point of views please!

Pfft. I'm definitely team Zacky.
Just cuz.
Plus everyone (Brian, Vee, Brian, Johnny, did a mention Brian?) are being douches.
DOUCHES I TELL YOU!
(Okay, Brian may be slightly less douche-ish in this one for standing up for Vee. But he still fucked Vee. So douche.)
I'm sad this will be over. D: I loved it oh so much <3

Ahhhhhhh
D:
what nooooo!!!! D:

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1. Vee is stupid for sleeping with Brian, of all people, or anyone at all, but I understand where she's coming from in terms of being hurt.

2. Johnny, although he has every right to be angry, needs to stop being a freaking d-bag and realize how much he was hurting her by accusing her of something without even discussing the matter with her properly.

3. Brian needs to realize that every time he butts in, he's gonna get a Short Shit fist to the face. Yeah, you wanna defend her, but seriously dude, just back off and let them squabble before you make matters worse (which he seems to be a scientist at doing!)

I love this story so freaking much and I'm going to be sad when it's over, BUT I'm so excited you're doing a sequel! Keep up the ever amazing work!

<3

ohhhh shizzzz!!! just... i... what do i say to this chapter..?? it's like i have to hold my breath for the next chapter xD

Holy fucking shit you have to update or I'll die/kill you.

shitshitshitwhatthehelljusthappenedimgoingtodieholycrapholycrapholycrap

God Vee. So stupid. Fucking Brian. D:
You know how I feel about Brian.
Oh well, excites things I suppose. (:
Amazing chapter <3

Very happy to see this story is back. I'm glad she didn't just leave Brian on his own even though I know there's going to be tons of drama in the next chapter.

I am SOOOOOO happy this story is back :) It's one of my favorites and I can't wait to see what happens. Vi was very brave walking out of the bathroom like that, especially to face Johnny out there. Uh oh, Speghettios!

I think I died a little bit.
.....
Why did you end it like that!? Oh, my god. This story has me hooked!
I need more. <333