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  • Ultraviolet Light

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    You updated!!
    ahhhh i know theres gonna be major drama in the next one!
    can not wait till you update again!
    April 7th, 2011 at 02:33am
  • Issues

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    She slept with Bri?! I knew(not really) there was something going on because they always fought. -.-
    The chapter was really interesting and I can't wait for the next chapter Please! Update soon! I can't wait for the sequal too.
    April 7th, 2011 at 12:26am
  • Slytherin-Pride

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    I just can't even :| What is my life even poor, poor Johnny o.O

    I can't... WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO MEEEEEE?! >.<

    Hummanahhhhhhhh!! You'd best be updating as quick as a cheetah that saw a deer and wants a meal, because I want to confirm my suspicions, POOR POOR JOHNNY! XD

    Anyway! Though I'm thoroughly bemused with the Brian situation, it was a bloody awesome chapter! Still loved it so yeah! Do it! :D

    xx
    April 7th, 2011 at 12:15am
  • AriStarshine

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    I started reading yesterday, making 3 am, when I should have started packing this morning, since I leave tomorrow... I like the way you write! ;) although i have to get why Violet is such a brat....the story flows well! they are cute and sweet but not in that sickening "i loved you since before I saw you" way.
    I like how they are always bickering, they make me laugh...but you got me at "Zinc, Calcium, and helped prevent tooth decay"....I swear I almost fell out my chair ^^
    Keep writing!(I am still at chapter 25, but can't wait to read more) ;)
    April 6th, 2011 at 01:14pm
  • briannal14

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    i finally finshed it and HOLY HELL!!!!! update!!!!
    April 2nd, 2011 at 04:16am
  • thePHunkmaster

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    (Ahhh...sorry for not replying to you xD)

    HOLY FUCKING SHIT. I did expect that to happen, but I didn't think you'd let it! I actually can't wait to read the next update and see how that goes cause I know people are gonna find out even if they try to keep it hush-hush.
    February 22nd, 2011 at 04:44am
  • PhoebenPaige

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    OMFG!!! Why? Oh Why? I don't know if i should be happy or pissed lol maybe both....hmm cant wait for more.
    February 15th, 2011 at 10:02pm
  • Planet Stumbler

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    WTF was that?! Noooooo!!! It's his fault! I ame the whole fucking thing on Syn.
    February 11th, 2011 at 06:42am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    As long as I get the hot, steamy details about their fucking awesome sex I don't care. I don't even care if the dirty bastard is filming it and live streaming it to Johnny's laptop. Or if it doesn't stay in the room at all and it all comes out that OK Vee didn't screw Keith Barney but she did fuck the brains out of Brian. Oooo not gonna make things easier with Violet. :-/
    More soon? Please?
    February 8th, 2011 at 09:17pm
  • synderella.

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    I'm so stoked to read the next chapter. I think this is the only story of yours I was behind on. Bring on the next update! >:O
    February 7th, 2011 at 01:18am
  • unholy confessions;;

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    Something tells me this is not gonna be good when Johnny finds out about it.
    January 31st, 2011 at 05:28pm
  • amyEternal7x

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    So, I would have done the same thing. Lol.
    This was amazing. I loved it.
    <333
    January 31st, 2011 at 04:15am
  • slumflower

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    Bahaha. I love you short shit, I really do, but I've been -waiting- for this. Karma's a fucking bitch. So yeah. I liked it all. Even though Brian's like a cocky asshole. Time to do the Syn. Hehe:)
    January 30th, 2011 at 11:53am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    I'm hoping the walls between the rooms aren't too thin. But seriously, If I was Vee and Brian made that offer and being all crazy seductive, I probably would sleep with him too. =\ All this shit is gonna come back and bite them in the ass. And that will be a fun chapter to read =D
    January 30th, 2011 at 10:50am
  • kmcgeezy

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    Holy blonde cheerleader, batman!
    Vee, why are you doing this?
    OMFG!
    Johnny has been a dickhead lately, but still!
    God, I fucking love this though.
    Keep up the fantastic work!
    :D
    January 30th, 2011 at 08:15am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    AHHHH DONT DO IT!!! DONT SLEEP WITH BRIAN! D:
    great update!!! loved it xD
    i need to see what happens!!! more soon
    January 30th, 2011 at 07:06am
  • asylum's riot.

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    ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?!
    JESUS CHRIST.
    BRIAN?! REALLY?! WHY NOT MATT. OR ZACKY. OR ANY-FUCKING-BODY ELSE BUT BRAIN!
    You totally do hate me...
    January 30th, 2011 at 06:55am
  • thePHunkmaster

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    Oh, Johnny, that's really manly. Go watch your soap operas. xD

    Damn Violet! She really wants the media to drown her in attention doesn't she? She's gonna be so stressed after that. What happens if she ends up losing her baby?

    "You'd want it if it was Paisley's baby!"
    HOLY FUCKING SHIT! OH MAI GAAAWD!

    She finally punched her like you promised! <3 Except, I dunno, I kind of feel bad for Violet since Brian won't help her, AT ALL.

    All this makes me wonder how your sequel to going to start off. I'm thinking it'll be when Violet is having her baby...Hmmmm
    January 29th, 2011 at 09:14pm
  • JayeRoxz93

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    Chapter 8 at the end thirty is spelled wrong btw the story is awesome so far
    January 28th, 2011 at 01:37am
  • amyEternal7x

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    My fuckin' god! I need more! lol.
    I loved this!
    <333
    January 25th, 2011 at 08:41am
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