No Matt, bad. It's great that you are trying to help Courtney, but YOU aren't suppose to fall for her. It might just be me, but it looks like it's leaning that way. Pedophile is no better than incest. d: Loved it tho! Hope you feel better. Bad breakups suck ass. <3
So glad you updated - it was a good chapter! I'm glad the other guys know now and are onto Brian and trying to find her, before she committs suicide, if she does.... I don't have any ideas either. You shouldn't have to ask your fans now anyway; you've got quite a few chapters now, the story is progressing well, we'll all love it no matter what happens, so just go with your gut and come up with something, anything. You've got a good situation; Bri's kidnapped her, the rest of the band know and Matt and Zacky are searching for her.... There's lots of places you could take that. We'll still be sitting on the edge of seats, anxiously waiting for the email to tell us you've updated!
Oh man. Haha. Zacky was cute being all worried. I don't think they should find them on purpose. Like accidentally come across Brians house or something? But not for another chapter or something. The anticipation is good. haha. And she better not kill herself. :l All I can say is keep going with what you think is best. I love how you have it going so far :D Update soon. :3 xx
First off, I'm glad everything worked out ok :) Second, nice update, although I do enjoy this story for the huge updates we always get, except for thsi one obviously. But it was good to see what Brian's thinking. I really can't wait for the next chapter! I'm dying to know what happens. It's such a great twisted story :) UPDATE SOON OR ELSE!!!!!
It was really awesome to get into look into Brians head about this. I got what he was thinking, but it's nice to see and read it. You get 10 points, and a cookie x3 haha Please update as quick as you can. Im eargerly waiting to see what is going to happen. =D xx
and off topic: has anyone ever noticed the Starbucks cup in the lower right-hand corner of the background picture?