Horrid Thoughts with Hard Questions - Comments

Your chapter lengths are... addictive. Ya'll know how to keep people interested, huh?

There are a few grammatical errors, but the story itself is fairly original. Good work though; nice flow, epic descriptions on the emotions and thoughts felt by the protagonist. I like this.

Alrighty. Finally got to reading this.
So the layout, I have to say, I'm madly in love with it.
I haven't quite read all of it yet, but I figured I'd comment now and read all the rest later.
It's short and sweet, and a lot of people don't like that, but I enjoy it.
The title wasn't my favorite.
But keep going. I'm subscribing. :D

Woah.
Nagi digs it though. Although the posts are short, I suppose that's the way it's got to work for multiple authors.

I am very intrigued as to what will happen next... And how Lizzy's gonna take it when they realize what they are in for.

Update and I will be your slave!!!!

It's fucking amazing

I didn't really like it. I am a fan-fic kinda person...
Sorry. It was good in the writing terms.
But the title was a little confusing....
Sorry XD

HOLY SHITTTTT!!!!! O__o I knew Adrian was weird! Dx NOOO, RUN!!!!

....yeah, I'm really into your story and shtuff :3 Keep up the good work guys!

Ew, what a creeper haha, but hey they need to make a living somehow. I hope it turns for the better for these two =)

This is amazing.

The descriptions were great!

Good job! :D

I would just like to say that this is amazing.

It's real, it's in your face. I love it.

I have the exact same colour hair as the girl on the summary page ^_^

This is a really good story, though the place Lizzy and Claire are staying at doesn't feel right, dun dun dunn.
You and the other writers are very talented and I can't wait for the next chapter.

-Katie

My comment failed! I wasn't done!

*I love the descriptions and charactor ties, they're very realistic.

This is really well written. Then I noticed who one of the authors was-Mattgasm.
So, I have no idea if you'd remember me, I changed my name from LiveLlamaLove a while ago, we were going to co-write, but there was a slight problem. She/you could only write slash, and I can't at all.

I've also never read a story like this, and so I have no idea how to rate it. I will tell you it has a beautiful layout and a good plot. I love the smdescriptionsv

The title is a bit too long for me, but I still like it. (: It's creative.

The layout is... gaaah! <3 -noms it up- Simple, and pretty, and I like the girls hair. o.-

The summary is amazing because if has my gf's name in it. ;O It's actually really good, though. Pulls me in. Makes me wonder, and makes me want to keep reading.

Chapter one is great. :D I seriously loved it. And I’m hungry. Why did I laugh at that? -facepalm- I love how you ended it, too. (:

Over all, great job. Loved this.

I smell some too close for comfort cousin love brewin'

cool update! fo' sho' yo?

Damn I can't believe I've never glanced at this story earlier. I feel like kicking myself in the ass.

Dude you and the other author are fucking great writers. The story is quick, emotional and mysterious all squished into one badass story. I'm subscribing to this.

I hope yall update soon. :)

I really can't wait to read more of this.
I feel like Adrian's going to do something to one of the girls - probably Elizabeth.
It's like there's this bad thing looming over the story.
Something's going to happen and I want so badly to know what it is.

I knew this was going to be completely new and original right when I read the summary. It's heartbreaking, but also sweet. The way the two girls take care of each other is amazing, and the fact that they had to put up with that all that BS...

It made me want to cry. D: I'm glad they ran away though, and since I've only read the first few chapters, I'm excited to see where this goes.

Title

It's a bit long, but still appeals to the readers. I love the meaning it gives.

Layout

Simple, but lovely nonetheless.

Summary

Sweet and to the point, it draws the reader in and makes them really curious as to what will happen.

Story

1:Very grand opening. It really has me on edge for what is going on.

2: Lovely descriptions and very amazing details. I love their relationship.

3:Kind of sweet. I'm confused as to why Claire is reluctant to leave. If I were her, I would have left ages ago.

4: This chapter right here is my favorite. I love how she isn't sure how to make it happen, but is determined anyways.

5: I loved the way Elizabeth thinks. It shows that she has an attitude, but still tries to hide it. Very grand.

Overall

This is one hel! of a story. I love the shortness of the chapters and the way they flow so smoothly together. You can be sure that I'll be back to read more later. Update soon! <3

I love that the chapters are short, but they explain a lot. That's really good.
This story is really good; there's a certain feeling of...realness in your writing. It just sets the perfect mood for the reader.

I'm looking forward to reading more, so please try and update again real soon! ^_^

First of all, I have to say that I love how original this whole idea is.
This is a joint-story, yes? Well I'm thoroughly impressed with how well you two both write this. I almost never find joint-stories that flow so well. I like that you both seem to know and understand Elizabeth and Claire's characters so well, there's no disconnect in the character development between you two.
The plot moves along very smoothly from beginning to end. I like that nothing is rushed.
Adrian is sort of shady, I can't wait to find out what type of a person he turns out to be!
I'm glad you asked me to read this story because it's very well written and it's sort of captured me, I plan on reading it to the end!!! Don't stop writing it =D