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  • Tattoo

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    Thanks for updating <3
    October 23rd, 2011 at 02:54pm
  • TechniColorScream

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    I still love this story, ever since the beginning. and it makes me smile when I see the update notification. Do I sense a plot twist? Is everything going to implode or something, the suspence is killing me!!! so hurrry up please.

    love,
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    October 23rd, 2011 at 06:56am
  • SingingSinner

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    awww everything feels so sad today i was listening to Demolition Lovers while reading this and listening to cancer while i wrote my two sad updates for today why so sad??? :,<
    October 23rd, 2011 at 02:57am
  • angy_something

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    Amaaaaaaaaaaaaazingness !!!!
    Love ya
    xo
    October 23rd, 2011 at 01:50am
  • natiehatesaim

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    As soon as I came across this chapter, I read all 74 chapters as quickly as I possibly could. I think it took me a little more than a week; interspersed with real-life things & such. It was like a book I couldn't put down; I could barely resist hitting each 'next chapter' button, even if it was going to make me late for wherever I was going.

    This is a fantastic story. I am absolutely hooked and now I will be impatiently awaiting the next update. I love how you portray Frank, by the way. I've never seen him written like that in any other fictions. On top of that, I've never read any kind of fic where one of the main characters was homeless. Ugh, I'm just in love with the entire thing. Absolutely fantastic job!

    And one more thing, since I read from chapter 1 to 74 almost all at once, I noticed a huge difference in the writing style. Not to say that you started out bad or anything, but you've improved drastically since you started writing this fic. I hope this doesn't offend you or anything, because the amount of improvement is definitely something to be proud of!

    Like I've already said, this whole story is superb. Keep on with it, I'm excited to read what happens next!
    October 13th, 2011 at 10:31pm
  • XrayPineapple

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    Oh, oh, poor Gerard baby! I just want to give him huggs. He does not deserve that. Although, was he telling the truth? Because Frank does put up a good argument against but the way Gerard reacts, the anger and frustration, would seem genuine. Oh, you do know how to weave a good plot. And as always I am in love with Frankie's mind! The way you write him is superb, his constant inner battle, especially those fears about how to react to Gerard's words. He truly is a wonderful character. I can't wait to see how they both react to this, surely Frank won't walk away, surely Gerard won't push him away, over something so silly. It would be such a waste.
    October 13th, 2011 at 01:57pm
  • BlackStainedMirrors

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    Even though Gerard's story is strange and kind of hard to believe, I believe him. ^_^ But no! Why can't they just be happy no you have got to get me anxious! >.< I hate when people get me anxious cuz I feel like shooting my self cuz It keeps me up at night lol! :D All I can think about is the situation all night! O.O But either way I love you for writing such amazing stories! Update soon, yesh? ._.
    ~Pansy
    October 10th, 2011 at 11:48pm
  • TechniColorScream

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    Wow that was really fucked up. I cant believe that Gerard would doubt frank, but frankie should of said something, even if his head was in termoil. As always it was great to read another chapter in this story and I hope they can have a happily ever after.

    Love,
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    October 10th, 2011 at 02:49am
  • Frank_Iero

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    what the fuck! they can never just be happy, and poor Gee!! i mean the guy can't win can he? :(
    October 10th, 2011 at 02:27am
  • Tattoo

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    Poor Gerard.
    His story is a bit hard to believe, but I'm sure he's telling the truth.
    Thanks for updating <3
    October 10th, 2011 at 02:24am
  • Delaney_chu

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    I LOVE THIS STORY... please please update soon
    October 10th, 2011 at 01:06am
  • angy_something

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    WooooW. This just left me speechless. :,|
    Love ya
    I'm glad you're back. :3
    October 10th, 2011 at 01:03am
  • DustyBullet

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    So glad for an update :)
    I'm not exaggerating when I say this is one of my favourite stories on mibba.
    I'll stick around no matter how long it takes you to update (heaven knows I'm just as bad/worse XD).

    So intrigued by this chapter! I'd never thought of anything like that before!
    The gang making those cuts on his arm is such a sick and twisted way to torment someone, because Gerard's right - no one WOULD believe it.
    Seriously, such a good idea (in terms of storywriting - not that it's a good idea to do to someone, obviously lmao)

    Of course I hope Frank manages to accept what's really going on and show it :(
    See you next time :)
    *Adds fuel*
    October 10th, 2011 at 12:23am
  • SingingSinner

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    i plan on sticking with this til the end doll so dont worry <3 i think im too attached to leave
    October 10th, 2011 at 12:06am
  • andreajp

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    Not gonna lie I wish you could've seen my face while I was reading this it went from awe they're cuddling face to serious concern anger face to just straight happy gleefull face when they made the relationship official to looking like a spy trying to figure out what the hell Frank's going to do about the whole cutting thing. Moar! I need MMMMMMOOOOAAARRR!
    September 5th, 2011 at 10:39am
  • Miss Tiffany Blews

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    And I was ready to go to the next chapter! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!
    September 1st, 2011 at 02:52am
  • XrayPineapple

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    Oh? Is there more trauma on the way? Why is Gerard doing that to himself? Will Frank ever get the answers from him? I like that Frank was reluctant to ask Gerard about it, how it was Gerard's secret and only his to tell, instead of just pressing at him for information and being annoying. Although I want Frank to get it out of Gerard, I want Gerard to trust him enough to tell him. I loved it as always, your Frank character is beautiful, I can't help but what him to be happy.
    August 29th, 2011 at 10:28pm
  • angy_something

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    Amaaaaaaazing. It was a great chappy. :)
    Love ya
    August 28th, 2011 at 06:17am
  • EvilBunny

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    Oh my god that was so adorable and sweet *squeals* loved the detail. There was a verrry good balance between Frank's mini panic session and the whole cuteness of the chapter ^_^ update soooonnnnn <3
    August 27th, 2011 at 02:18pm
  • Emochick920

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    I love it
    August 27th, 2011 at 04:19am