Creatures Of Forever - Comments

I love this story and how realistic you make it out to be. You have amazing writing talent. Keep it up!

fucking loved the first chapter; better written than most vampyric stories.

You, my darling, are amazing. <3 I am hooked. ;]

Amazing story. You've really got talent.
Reading this story makes me feel like I'm actually watching all that happen, you know?
Your characters seem so real and I'm in love with the plot.

One question though. "Wesley" said that Lilith and he were aound 16 when they "faced" that stranger who obviously "turned" them or at least had something to do with it. So..that means, they look like 16, right?
It doesn't really matter but I was just asking because the awesome pics you chose for your characters looked older than "around 16".
I was just curious.

:O first comment! >:D
Well this is a very splendid story :3
you're good at writing and awsomeness on how realistic the story is :D
You should definitly continue
^^