Omfg, I've been waiting for an update, and this was amazing! No joke, I was smiling the whole time, my friends are staring at me like I'm an idiot haha but this was worth the wait! Can't wait for another update!!!
You need to sack yourself across the face because this was beautiful! I loved it it was sweet and I could picture John in a nice cute tux with a big smile on his face It was well worth the wait I promise (;
NO! no! No! no! no! Lindsay has to be okay!! I hope she's alright! But, if she isn't, maybe it will make John be around more. He'd beable to spend more time with Allie?
I really liked the conversation between John and his mother. I don't know why exactly, but I think it's because they can be so truthful towards each other and not hold anything back. That was an awesome update girl!
I paused Zombieland just to read this because! This was without a doubt the most adorable chapter in the world! Every girls dream proposal was written in this chapter lmao Super glad you posted this
Awww John is soooo adorable!! Damn, I wanna guy like him!! I like the part where the three flowers were on the bed and the last one she picked up had it written on the back something like "I'm sorry I can't be here everynight" or something like that. I was just like "awww*sob*" and then she got teary eyed. cuuute. I think I just like, fell in love with a fake John! haha (: It's so cute he noticed the little things she does and then when he proposed he was a wreck. Adorable. Just adorable. See? I wish their marraige was like that now!!! err! I hope they sort it out soon. can't wait for the next chapter oh, btw, I like how John has the present tense and Lindsey is past. Clever. (: