I didn't see anything wrong...awe this was adorable! I loved it (: I love how John was all *_- about her moving back you my friend are an amazing write I am overly jealous lmao Can't wait for the present update -_- shits about to go down I can feel it...or maybe I'm just excited either way hurry up (:
i literally gasped when i found out Allie was their child..and then i got happy that they got married and stuff so im happy now update soon!!!! please:)
Okay so I went back and re-read this chapter and uhhh I still think Lindsey is being a bitch (no offense) but I feel like we should know about when she finally agreed to marry him where it all went down and what not. John's a good guy and as much as it would piss me off too that he was constantly gone, but it's the fact that he's out not only having fun playing shows for fans but also working to get them what they need to survive. Maybe if Lindsey did let John take Allie out on a week of tour or something she might understand what daddy does and how much he really does love her even though he may be gone a lot. (: maybe?
HOLY POOH!!! so did not see that at all And Lindsey needs to get over herself I mean really? Why can't she just tell Allie what's really going on with her dad and not fucking lie and come up with excuses jezzus frick?! Yes continue why wouldn't you?! Why shouldn't you?!
Oh okay I see how it's going I like it ahbleh! I really wanna know more don't update so soon now I wanna ponder a little on John and Allie and Lindsey try to stiffle through some if the puzzle pieces persay
Yeye sequel!!!!! Super excited, my theory is something happened to Lindsay maybe? Or her and john just grew apart. But Im leaning towards something happened to her if all of the chapters in her pov are past tense. Well I am so excited an can't wait :)
Linds ran out yet again, John finally got tired of her bullshit then one drunken night he runs into this chick Allie who reminded him of Linds slept with her woke up again thinking it was linds only to be slightly dissapointed that it wasn't but kept her around and then BAM he realized that this Allie chick is ten times better. Or! same idea about the drunken night Linda finds out gets all Bwahahahahaha<----cries she then hooks up with one of the guys to get back at John but he's no longer affected because Allie is better.... Hmmmm....that's all I can come up with lame