A New Beginning - Comments

yes keep going it's a cute story

I like your story, I really think you should keep it :) Update again soon

i like this story
i hope you keep writing

I still read the story! I think you should keep it =)

You should totally keep it it's a great story with a lot of promise. I love cute a7x story's like this and I don't think there's enough of them please don't take this one away from me it's to good

Keep it, i've re-read it atleast 5 times, updates would be good 'cause this story is great : D

HEy i like your story continue?

I think you should keep it.

Oh my God, LOL!!! this was s o funny, especially the part with Jay and Abby, I burst out laughing and then my friend was klike, 'What's so funny?!"
I hope you update soon. Abby's so cute!!:D

Update? I'll be waiting

Love this (:

please please please please please continue your story i so love it

who the hell reported this story?!?!?!?! that sucks majorly! i am so pissed right now, hopefully you can post and continue the story...

wow whatever i cant believe it was reported how stupid -____- hope it doesnt get deleted! this is so good!

...banned? -.-
well aint that just effing lovely! -.-

Haha awe that's legit the Berry Brothers found her
atleast it wasn't some creeper

loved it 

awwwww so adorable.
..makes me want a big lolli now.. hehe

this story is CUTE! i was smiling the whole time i read it!!

loved the update! update again soon!!!

Ok so remember you wanted feedback :) Let me ask you a philosophical and developmental question, in ch.1: “I would be adopted for me, not because I would be a winning prize to someones eyes” …question: can a 7 year old have that deep of thoughts/moral/self worth of feelings? That was just the worst, you put a lot of very high end thinking in here in her POV. She’s she gonna be a genius? But then if she was she would have already picked up what tattoos were and if Jimmy was actually gonna eat her. Just saying, this isn’t posted in a bitchy tone, just a curious one. I have no clue what to think of this 7 year old with so many contradictory stuff (and only in ch.1 so far!)

Ch.2- ("Yep, that's my boy!" If it could be any more possible, I started blushing even harder) ok 1. Lol, zacky! 2. Kinda creepy the 7 yo picked up on what zacky was talking about, makes me wonder what shes been around. Update: never, looks like she has no clue about that kinda stuff but then my ch.2 stuff above makes no sense. I understand confusion on her part of what zacky said but not embarrassment.

Ideas: don’t let her be kidnapped, that’s way to over done. Just let it be a scare moment for the new parents, maybe have them find her talking to another little kid outside or whatever. Other idea: dance class! I think it would be cute to see Matt there or she can join kiddy soccer with Jay. Another: teaching to swim or ride a bike. Maybe give her a little girl friend too, like a neighbor (Zack can joke his sons a pimp ;] )