A New Beginning - Comments

well there are many things that can happen with this story. fist off there is what happens to abby, if she is lost some one, a fan possibly, took her and what will happen because of that is she going to be terrified of other people or will she not like the fans. second off you could twist the story with abby getting a sickness. if is it a live threatening illness like cancer please do not kill her i hate hate hate stories that kill off the main character. You can also consider the band members getting quality time with abby, maybe a day or two of bonding. there is also the choice of home schooling, please do not go down the road of public schools it is done over and over again and i like how fresh and original this story is. the homeschooling could be quite interesting. there are many more things that could happen, if you do not like any of this ideas that is fine with me but if you want some more ideas let e know. i am ready for an update with a new chapter soon. i miss reading this story.

im lovin this storyy <3 moore soon pleasee!

I'm so excited to read more<3
How cute are those two!

Matt Abby is not a big girl! she still a baby girl! now omfg i hope she doesnt get lost! D:

ABBY!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
..i feel bad for the SOB who took abby. he/she/it is gonna feel the wrath of M. Shadows.

OMG Abby is missing

can't wait for the next update

Hi, I thought this story was really funny!

Haha, i blushed reading the last part of the last chapter x]
I'm totally subscribing to this story, love it!!!

I love how it's a younger kid, rather than a teenager :) It's very good :D

I like the part wend Abby got scared of Jimmy thinking he is going to eat her! xD

I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE MORE
I LOVE THE LAST PART

oh crap! haha i have really enjoyed your story.. cant wait till the next one. i have to say i wasnt expecting that little conversation in the last chapter but it was funny, thank you for your story

i really like your story so far.
cant wait for more.

:'DDD hahahaha thats epic! :') curiousity killed thekids cat

Love it

HAHAHAHA

oh my god, my bestfriend liked jumped from her computer to read the last part, poor kids.

LOVEE IT

AWWWW

alright i love this and am like begging you for an updatee :D

i promisee to be a loyal commenter and you can message me anytime for story ideas

i shout out of bed and like jumped up typing this :D plus the fact im sick :D

"sibscribess!*

awe jayden is soo cute
cant wait for the next update
:D

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
How adorable.
I am so excited to read this story.
I can't wait for more!

Let me get it out now:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
:DDDDD
That was so adorable!
:DDDDDD
I seriously love Abby!
And Jayden!
Do I detect a future romance?
;D
They are so fucking cute!