please excuse my absence.i've been detained...but im back and enjoying my freedom with my favorite story!! i'll make up for being gone so long to you,MhiiszTriniiStunnuuh,by commenting after every chapter i read.hehe.i know you luv it.first one: *clears throat* I wouldn't mind if Sean made me breakfast.yaaaayyy! on to the next chaptah!!
You asked last chapter who do you like more Sean Ashton Vladimir or Count. Well I like Sean most and i want to know his sad past like why he hung his head in shame. The next person i like is a tie between Ashton and the Count more so Ashton even tho he betrayed Sean and Jazz because u can see him more as a person and you come to know more of him. The Count I know nothing about and i cant see anyone really liking his character because I cant relate. And Vlad.......I do not like him he needs to be smacked a few times, same with the council they r becoming a power that is to....one sided they care nothing for the "people." lol anyways i like your story cant wait for more updates.
So I just spent the past 45 minutes reading this and...I love it. (:
I do have to agree with JessiJester though about how you really should put spaces after your punctuation. It's still a good story; that would just make it better.
For me, there's a tie between Ash and Count for who I like better. Count's so nice and sweet, or that's how it seems, but Ash has (what comes off to me as) a bad boy-ish attitude, which I really like.
i literally ready ten chapters in like a half hour. i DEVOURED the awesomeness of this story. the count need to get it on with jasmine. at least a good kissing scene. something.im dyin here! haha. luv it even more. please continue!