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Oh, hey, hi, you hunk of hotness <3 I always loved Chuck, even though he was the biggest ass in history xD Anyways, I love how the tone matches Chuck's sophisticated personality. I know this comment really sucks compared to yours - and it's also a bit late >.< - but honestly, you've rendered me speechless once again with your writing.
I think I might steal your writing style, what with it being so awesome and all :D
This is definitely my favorite by you! Lovely job <3

I think Chuck Bass is one of the best things to happen to Primetime television.
o.O
Your banner is -fangirlgiggle- HOT!
Well, the guy in it is.
Great story, and great summary!
I'll have my bass to go too! [/verylamejoke]

I love your descriptions. They're almost like metaphors, but better and less sappy. I really liked this!!

Once again, I am astonished at the brilliance that is your writing.
I'm absolutely in love with this, and I don't even watch Gossip Girl.

Not too much action, but a great amount of description.
Even though I have no idea who Chuck Bass is, I still enjoyed reading this one-shot.
It was really wonderful!

I feel like I've read this before.
But nonetheless, as always it was wonderful.
You know of all people on this site, that I heart your work.
A big fat juicy galloping heart of love.

The way you describe the scenery is always exquisite, I think description is your best quality as a writer.
I feel though, that what you need to work on is action. I feel like the majority of the piece is describing the scenery and what people are wearing or what they look like[ something along those lines] but not much is really happening, if that makes sense?

But otherwise great job.

"Dining alone, her body held beneath a cluster of teal design. Perfection glistened in the darkness of her eyes, as caramel whirls whispered tempting thoughts as they swayed near to the lobe of her ears."
You have an amazing ability for discription. I loved this, the first paragraph had me.
It was intresting, erotic in it's own way.
Your an amazing writer. Probably one of the best on here.
Your nack for writing will take you far if you choose to go that road.

Chuck Bass. <3
This was brilliant. Simply brilliant.
Your use of details is marvelous! Everything was just so vivid, and I loved everything about it!
You're certainly an amazing author!
LIGHORSJIS. [Heh, sorry about that.]
I just love, love, loved this.
I'm somewhat speechless.
Wonderful job! <3 (:

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You are amazing. I just get so weird and excited every time I read one of your stories. xD
This is seriously beautiful. I just GAHH I love it so much.

Ivory stained features cursed opulent walls with he presence of angelic cherubs
The only mistake I noticed. I think that's supposed to be "the" instead of "he."

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I loved how descriptive this was, and effective in creating its own little elegant world. I think the picture also works really well with the story- especially since you can't see who the woman is. I liked how simple the two lines of dialogue were, and nothing else was needed. A wonderful little story :)

If you could please comment on this :)

This one-shot, I presume to be one of the best I've read in a while.
The tone was extremely sophisticated; I loved that you used so many words that aren't uttered everyday. It matched the personality of Mr. Bass.
I loved the detail as well.
It really formed a lovely picture in my mind as I read.
As an actor upon the stage, who’s lines of wit stir the interest of both the audience and future night’s exhilaration in a parallel role - That would have to be my favourite line out of the whole story. :)

I don't really know Gossip Girl, but I like the characterization. It worked well and it was honest. It was also a very good style of writing. It was concise and gave enough to let us see it and little enough to let us imagine it for ourselves.

I really like this.

I've never seen Gossip Girl, so I kind of read it as an original. Your descriptions are really great. You paint a very vivid world. However, I'd tone them down just a hair, because it can almost seem kind of forced. On the other hand though, that formality goes very well with your character, so I'd keep it the same. I guess it's all just personal opinion.

(confusing, sorry. )

Otherwise, I really liked this. Very nice!

You have a unique style of writing. I like it, but I'm not so fond of the whole story. I'm not much of a fanfic or Chuck Bass person xD Other than that though, it was gorgeous. So many beautiful descriptions floating around... that part was great. :D

I just...This was beautiful. The words you used were simply beautiful themselves and the descriptions were amazing. This was really, really good. I liked this a lot.<3

I'm in love with your writing style. Simply breathtaking. Sultry and seductive, yet subtle. Kinda... Victorian-esque. ;] I have no idea who Chuck Bass is (fans, don't attack me! In my mind I'm out of the North American world) but I can already tell what kind of person he is. XD Well I enjoyed this thoroughly. I think I just had a brain orgasm.

Oh hello there Chuck Bass. :D

Your descriptions are amazing. You create a world for your readers to get lost in which is totally amazing. You have so much talent it's insane.

I really liked the last line. It made me laugh.

Very well done. (:

Wow.

This was one of the most descriptive pieces I think I've ever read. It was brilliant. Everything was so clear, and your way with words is excellent. You just seem to know how to mould them together to make such a vivid scene in the reader's head. It takes a very talented person to do that, and you pulled it off excellently. ^_^

Well done, I thoroughly enjoyed this.

I liked this.
You have an intensely descriptive style.

This line was especially beautiful: Ivory stained features cursed opulent walls with he presence of angelic cherubs, withholding their cherished arrows within the grasp of stone darlings, yet striking their bows with the touch of voluptuous embraces

It also contained the one spelling mistake I could spot. I bolded it for you.

This whole story felt extremely poetic, and almost old-worldly or Victorian in its style.
You're a brilliant writer.

You are brilliant