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  • Nanner.

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    He swirled the rim of a crystalline cocktail glass, swaying both his alcohol and hand in motion to the music gliding through his aristocratic atmosphere. - Brilliant way to start off the story.

    Your descriptions are so well done. I felt like I was there and it was as if I was watching the TV show for every detail was there.

    You're an excellent writer. :)
    July 22nd, 2010 at 11:06pm
  • wicked ways

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    I don't like fan fics but this amazing.
    I really like it :D
    You describe things really well too.
    July 22nd, 2010 at 09:27pm
  • tiffany danielle

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    I am in love with your details. You've got this fabulous, expressive, descriptive way of writting that is ever so addicting, aha. (:

    I liked this story and I think you did a good job. (:
    July 22nd, 2010 at 09:11pm
  • toxic lullabies.

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    Beautifully written :)
    Your descriptions are amazing,
    and I love a good Chuck Bass one shot ;)
    July 22nd, 2010 at 08:00pm
  • alexander bernadotte

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    I have to admit that I loved Chuck always. He's such an ass, but he's got this suave feel that you can't shake. I can't bring myself to hate him x]
    This was wonderful. The ending was like hehehehe, what an ass ;D
    As always, LOVELY FREAKIN' JOB :D <3
    July 21st, 2010 at 12:02am
  • chutes too narrow

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    I think the style is lovely, but sometimes you have me pulling me theasaurus out. It has this calssy elegant touch, and this suave locomotive touch remained throughout. I envy your stylistic consistencey. The interactions between chracters are very realistic. Good job (:
    July 20th, 2010 at 11:21pm
  • silk tea.

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    CHUCK BASS FUCK YES.

    So I guess he got shot in the season finale?
    I haven't seen any of the show, but I stalk their pictures.

    I love your descriptions darling.
    Now I need more action!
    Where there's action there's cause for description, together the two of you will make babies.
    July 20th, 2010 at 11:07pm
  • solarflarestares

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    Wow. This was just... wow.
    July 20th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • paranoid android.

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    Sometimes I wonder if your description is too much, but I do so much enjoy just sitting and loosing myself in the worlds you create: it's like in Inception, as it seems you're actually creating a world for yourself--in as much detail as possible.

    The dialouge was simple yet very effective in portraying the characters--Chuck's a total player. :P
    July 20th, 2010 at 04:49pm
  • Mat Devine

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    mmm this made my night! I loved how much it felt like Chuck Bass, this entire thing just lived and breathed him.
    The descriptions, as ever, are breathtaking, even more so than I've ever read and I must say that this is an excellent piece of writing that you have here. I adore what you did with it and it was just so utterly fantastic that I can't say more than I love you for this.
    It was beautifully written and perfectly executed.
    <3 Chuck xD
    July 20th, 2010 at 02:22am