He swirled the rim of a crystalline cocktail glass, swaying both his alcohol and hand in motion to the music gliding through his aristocratic atmosphere. - Brilliant way to start off the story.
Your descriptions are so well done. I felt like I was there and it was as if I was watching the TV show for every detail was there.
I have to admit that I loved Chuck always. He's such an ass, but he's got this suave feel that you can't shake. I can't bring myself to hate him x] This was wonderful. The ending was like hehehehe, what an ass ;D As always, LOVELY FREAKIN' JOB :D <3
I think the style is lovely, but sometimes you have me pulling me theasaurus out. It has this calssy elegant touch, and this suave locomotive touch remained throughout. I envy your stylistic consistencey. The interactions between chracters are very realistic. Good job (:
So I guess he got shot in the season finale? I haven't seen any of the show, but I stalk their pictures.
I love your descriptions darling. Now I need more action! Where there's action there's cause for description, together the two of you will make babies.
Sometimes I wonder if your description is too much, but I do so much enjoy just sitting and loosing myself in the worlds you create: it's like in Inception, as it seems you're actually creating a world for yourself--in as much detail as possible.
The dialouge was simple yet very effective in portraying the characters--Chuck's a total player. :P
mmm this made my night! I loved how much it felt like Chuck Bass, this entire thing just lived and breathed him. The descriptions, as ever, are breathtaking, even more so than I've ever read and I must say that this is an excellent piece of writing that you have here. I adore what you did with it and it was just so utterly fantastic that I can't say more than I love you for this. It was beautifully written and perfectly executed. <3 Chuck xD
Your descriptions are so well done. I felt like I was there and it was as if I was watching the TV show for every detail was there.
You're an excellent writer. :)