Roots and Wings - Comments

Holy crap! Update this is amazing!

Still entirely awesome. I'm glad you guys have decided to stay with it. I was getting worried that I'd never know the end. I love that he calls her kitten.

I know I should be more constructive but I cannot be. This was an awesome read and I'll definitely be waiting for another update soon. Subscribed!

You really have a way with words. It's something I really admire. You paint such a picture that it's like I'm watching a movie. Really wonderful. I'm curious to see if her dad was a werewolf of some kind. I bet he was, but I hate jumping to conclusions out loud, due to the fact I'm wrong a lot. xD Ha. But this is awesome. It really grips the reader, and makings them want to continue on to the next chapter. There was so much going on in this chapter, and so many questions that need answering. You just got to know what's next. xD So, really well written and enticing~. I adore you're work. <3

When I saw there was an update, my first thought was 'Can it be?!' I was really excited and it sure didn't disappoint. Any update is preferred rather than none and I don't mind waiting for something this amazing.

Re-read again. Still wonderfully amazing. I love Damon and I think you guys portray him perfectly. Plus I love Noelle. She's very... feisty, I guess. Not really sure how to describe her but I like it. And you have those fabulous one-liners in there that make me want to laugh out loud. Wish I could but my father would think I'm crazier than I am. Please update again soon! This has tons of promise for wonderful things to happen

I really love the layout and the colors. Although, I would like to see the top of the banner moved down a bit so it looks like there is a border around everything.

I was pleasantly surprised with the first chapter. It is fucking awesome! The way you describe the burning flesh and her dad's dead body hitting the ground made me shiver. I also like the name Noelle. I've never seen the Vampire Diaries, or read the book(s?), so I'm not sure if she is an original character or not. It is based off of a book right? Lol I'm not sure.

Holy shit! The beginning of the second chapter was so clever. I love the way you described the rush of running and...she's a panther? Oh snap! So her dad was one too then? And this demon lady really did save Noelle from being killed? Hm, strange but it is so interesting to read.

"Just kidding." - This line made me smile.

So far the three chapters have been very appealing to me. I'm not too big of a fan of the chapter title at the very top of the banner, but it doesn't deter away from the lovely layout, too much - for me that is anyway.

I’m sad to see this hasn’t been updated in almost a year? What happened?

That 'I ate the canary and I liked it' smirk- LOL!!!! That is just too funny <3 Any particular reason why 'I'm Damon.' isn’t in proper quotes? And again, Noelle’s babbling while explaining how she knows Stefan is absolutely HILARIOUS.

Oooh, such a dark tone. Only two words, yet they sound so sultry and deep- I can almost hear them rolling off his tongue. Dinner time.

Haha, so amusing- Damon’s slightly repetitive process of elimination regarding Noelle’s resistance to his compulsion. Good analysis of his personality; I’m writing the review as I go, and expect to find some sarcastic humor along the lines somewhere.

Where you wrote ‘She lunged. She died.’ Did you mean she lunged and he died? In chapter six, I mean. And oh damn, how intense of an ending.

So long without an update- how disappointing. Have you given up on this? I rather like where this was heading, although the last update from October of last year… I suppose we’ll see.

This was awesome. I'm subscribing.
I love Vampire Diaries and I love this <3
Great job! [=

This was awesome. I'm subscribing.
I love Vampire Diaries and I love this <3
Great job! [=

I love it, Noele is a def good trade in for Elena. There is a good flow between each author and that is nice. I like how it provides all these random back stories into her life, slowly unraveling. And I definetly liked when Damon got snubbed by her. Good read, and A+ for the originality.

O.o He's at her door? This is going to be good. *gets popcorn*

That jacket was Armani, one of a fucking kind.

I loved that line. It made me laugh.
Anyway, update soon :)

I loved that little memory/flashback scene in the chapter. It was definitely interesting to learn a little bit more about Noelle and Katherine.
And the last line of the chapter was freaky. In a good way of course :)
Can't wait for more.

Holy Freaking Bananas and cream, missy. I have to admit I lost my interest in the Vampire Diaries after her books started getting to out there to follow coherently for me,but this makes me want to go back and reread them all over again.<3

I love your detail and I love how you leave us with this giant mystersious cliffhanger :)
I'll prolly sub and continue tostalk read this.<3

I never watched the Vampire Diaries, but it seems cool. So there's many things I like about this. The layout, and banner. They go so nicely together. But in the banner, there's a typo. She's a moster, a beautiful monster.--whoever made the banner is brilliant, it's just they forgot the n, in monster. I also like the way it started. The air smelled of gunpowder and smoke. It leaves me with questions, and it was only that one short sentence. That cliffhanger was awesome too. There was so much suspense in this, I loved it. <3 You're just awesome like that.

Loved this update!
It was definitely interesting to see what goes on in Damon's head XD
Update soon :)

Awesome!!!!!!!!

I've never been able to get into the Vampire Diaries - I think I've watched one episode - and I like how you don't need to have seen the show to comprehend what's going on in the story.

You girls are both fabulous writers - you definitely know what your doing.
Your descriptions are indepth, your images are vivid, emotions are real.
You've definitely got the makings of a great story here.

Cool story. I have no idea what Vampire Diaries is or are, but I rather enjoyed this. I'm subscribing.

As always beautifully written silk.