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  • losing control.

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    I love Vampire Diaries, and this was amazing.
    Your descriptions are so real, I felt like I was there watching the whole thing happen.
    I'm excited to see when she meets Stefan and Damon. :D

    Very nice. (:
    August 1st, 2010 at 06:23pm
  • alexander bernadotte

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    I have the hugest obsession with The Vampire Diaires right now, which reminds me to buy the books, lol! Like I said with Peepshow, I love all the spins you put on already awesome shows and movies. You've got me hooked.
    And I have to mention that in the third chapter when Jennifer says, “You…you’re not human.” it totally reminded me of Hellsing. Just putting that out there, lolol!
    Anyhoo, lovely job once again! You've got another sub <3
    August 1st, 2010 at 06:15pm
  • alice liddell.

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    Oh my god, this is soo good.
    I'm so hooked on this story.
    I cannot wait until Noelle meets Stefan and Damon :)
    Can't wait for more!
    July 29th, 2010 at 11:49am
  • florence

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    I need mooooore! <3
    July 29th, 2010 at 05:56am
  • florence

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    Holyshizzzz. The second chapter is entirely amazing as well.

    The way you describe her hunting at the beginning is incredible.
    And then the way you connect back to that at the end... brilliant.

    I really love this story. <3
    You guys have to update again soon!
    July 25th, 2010 at 07:59am
  • alice liddell.

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    Can't wait til Stefan and Damon come into the story.
    And I love how you end the chapter with that last line since it was used in at the start of chapter :)
    July 25th, 2010 at 03:29am
  • paranoid android.

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    I saw your signiture and was like OMFG IT'S HER BIRTHDAY!
    Well, I wasn't, but HAPPY BIRTHDAY<3

    This, like all of your works, is beautiful; the use of short sentences creates brilliant suspense and the description paints so vividly.
    "A single scream. A scream of denial that could’ve cost her everything. Until she came."

    Love! (L)
    July 21st, 2010 at 05:54pm
  • florence

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    Omigosh. fewfbuqo.

    This is awesome. Everything was so clear and visual, but yet I had close to no idea what was happening.
    Creating something like that is near impossible, but you've accomplished it, my dear.

    I'm super uber excited to see what this is going to be.
    Subscribing. <3
    July 21st, 2010 at 05:43pm
  • winterfell.

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    The title itself pulls me in, and I like the poem that you used in your summary - from the little that I've read, it seems to fit.
    There's a sense of mystery in the prologue that I'm loving, and your imagery was fantastic. I'm intrigued by the characters, and I love the dark atmosphere and mood of this. Even though I've never seen the Vampire Diaries, I'd definitely be interested in reading more.
    July 21st, 2010 at 06:00am
  • Mat Devine

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    I really like the imagery of this chapter, it was very vivid, like I could almost feel the blood splatter on my face.
    I've never seen vampire diaries but I really liked how this has started, it seems different and very cool. Can't wait to see where you go with it! :3
    July 21st, 2010 at 02:37am
  • Unpretty

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    Fucking omfg, this was awesome.
    So much imagery. You never let me down. :D
    I'll subscribe.
    July 21st, 2010 at 01:52am
  • eternity.

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    This was so good! :D I'm so intrigued, that I need more. I'm subscribing! (: Great job! :D
    July 20th, 2010 at 11:49pm