July 26th, 2010 at 07:37am
Jungle - Comments
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I came across this story and it has quickly become one of favorites ^-^ keep up the good work!July 26th, 2010 at 07:32am
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I very much like this story. It's one of my current top favourites, if not the favourite. The characters are endearing even though half are anothers', you keep them fresh and lovable in their own seperate ways and I appreciate that. You are a talented writer and I cannot wait until the next update. I had to look three times to make sure those were actually two new chapters there since most people take wayyy too long to update - not to say I don't understand taking your time, but... Lol.
All of this pending conflict, tension, suspense... I love it. Careful though, you may be starting a new internet addiction for us innocents. Jeeze, lady.
=DJuly 26th, 2010 at 05:17am -
Hmm, for your first story, you're quite the writer.
I like the character, and even if I just started to read your story;
it's awfully addicting.
(: Update soon - even though I won't be able to read it
till like, tomorrow or something. :3
<3July 26th, 2010 at 03:11am -
i love love love this story. I just finished your latest chapter and i subscribed. update soon please :)
btw, i already know what she looks like now, sorry for the stupid question, haha. Annnd i loved the sex scene, sooo yeah. haha. sexyyy,July 25th, 2010 at 10:09pm -
I like this chapter. It had me smiling for reasons I'm not really sure of^^July 25th, 2010 at 09:17pm
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Yay. Her and Jacob in the rain!
More soon!July 25th, 2010 at 08:05pm -
Love it(: What does Madison look like, though?July 25th, 2010 at 07:34pm
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*laughs* Darling, everyone puts a little of themselves into their writing. I do it too. But that was an awesome chapter. I didn't find it filler-ish at all. I'm glad Claire and Nicolas got her a car, but I still don't like Nicolas. I don't know what it is about him, I just...don't. Or maybe I'm just harbouring Madison's views and accepting them as my own...whatever the case, amazing job.July 25th, 2010 at 07:13pm
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great story! totally love it =DJuly 25th, 2010 at 07:12pm
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Loved the update.
I loved her leaving scene, though it was sad it was well done.
Poor Jacob getting yelled at. haha.
More soon?July 25th, 2010 at 05:57pm -
Lui, Lui, Lui, this is freaking amazing! I was actually caught off guard when you said that Nicolas was a vampire! I wonder what Sam will do when he meets her, considering the pack needs to meet everyone's imprint...hrm...this is going to get interesting. Favourite part? When Jacob told her that she didn't need the pills anymore and she believed him. Most hated part? She picked them up again. Sam made me laugh when he was talking to Jacob about how Nicolas was worried, yet Jacob was just harbouring Madison in his room all night. AMAZING JOB!July 25th, 2010 at 04:40pm
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so, Madison is a half breed?
and Jacob imprinted on her?
It's grrrrreat!July 25th, 2010 at 03:29pm -
Love it once again!July 25th, 2010 at 09:20am
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Great update!
Loved their scene together.
More soon!July 25th, 2010 at 09:00am -
Why Don't You call it Raging Hormones? or something?July 25th, 2010 at 07:53am
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Whaaaat, now it says that others commented in the 7th hour instead of 2:30.... This is messed. Just sayinJuly 25th, 2010 at 07:19am
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I'm confused by mibba's time - it says people have commented on july 25th at 2:37 a.m. but it's not even 1:17a.m. where I am... I'm still trying to make sense of this... lol I can't wait until I realize what a dumbass I am..
Anyway, I love this story; it's got that sort of primal feel that other people here have only tried and FAILED at. I love it.
=)
Can't wait to see how things turn out~July 25th, 2010 at 07:18am -
LOVE IT!!!! And as I could help you with the title if you want?July 25th, 2010 at 07:16am
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yes! jacob! hahaha... ive been wondering when youd put him in! good job!July 25th, 2010 at 04:00am
Can't wait for more
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