That is a SAD chapter. I didn't know how her mum died...then again, I don't think anyone did. That was absolutely freaking amazing! As you know, like always, your writing is impeccable and if you want to put an image in the summary (even though if it's a character/descriptive the rules say you can't) you put [img/]URL HERE[/img] Take out the / after the first img though. If you get that...I tend to overcomplicate stuff like that...ANYWAYS, I'M RAMBLING. Amazing job and keep up the good work :3
:L Kay, so I know I seem like I'm spamming your comments, but I'm really not. You just update really fast :3 It's really awesome too! This story is great. And I love how Madison think that there's nothing to do in Forks...oh, how wrong she is. There's a bunch of amazing native boys...and was the boy she saw Edward? Or Jacob? Or one of the other natives? Hrm...a mystery! Keep it up :)
Wow. That last chapter was hard. How could her dad not have told his new wife about his daughter? Really? What kind of father does that? He doesn't seem to care much, does he? Sorry, so many questions from me, the peanut gallery. But this story is amazing. It's sad that the only thing Madison can turn to right now is drugs, because they're the only things she can trust. I really hope she gets to meet the Quileute boys soon and trusts them quickly. She needs another escape :3 Sorry, I'm a nerd like that. But this is just an awesome story. You're an amazing writer, and keep up the good work!
This is a really great story. I was hooked from the moment you introduced Madison! I can see myself (and every other seventeen year old child) in her! Keep up the great work!