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DDDDx That chapter was sad
Like, I want her and Jacob back together
But it was freaking amazing!
Please don't wait too long to update again!
This story is my happy pill [;

Wooooow, a lot of strong emotion in this chapter. :DD
I loved it.
And to be honest, I'm glad that the old Madison is showing her face.
I love the chase that happens in stories, and Jacob would
just be a great chaser, lol.

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wow, good job! maddie rocks =P

but she's right! she doesnt blong to silly jacob! although she is getting quite annoying i get where she's coming from...

awesome chapter!

She has so much hate in herself.
She needs to forgive sometimes, even when she has suffered so much.

I can't imagina how your able to write like that.

okay, so i was listening to music while reading chapter 25, which is awesome btw, and the song i was listening to perfectly fit. Like i actually read the chapter in the time it took for the song to end, which was awesome, and like.. you need to hear it. you might not like it but it totally goes with it.

the song is called Pieces by Red.
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Of course it's amazing, Lui. I loved it. I was so beautiful, so conflicted, so detailed, so emotional...my Gods. I can't wait until you update! It was gorgeous and wonderful and I'm so glad I can read about Madison again after my grounding. I loved it with everything I can. <3

Yay beautiful update <3

Did I like it? Yes.
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You're right, the music sends it to a totally different level. =)

wow, that chapter actually made me cry; namely the ending and the whole façade with the pictures being gone

lovely music too =) i've been listening to that track for ages and it definitely fitted in with the chapter!

just wanted to add that i loved a certain part in one of the previous chapters a lot; when embry or quil asks madison how she can just act normal when she's in hospital and she says 'i'm not', very...not sure what the word is but it had a good effect =)

awesome chapters as usual!

Of course I love it! :D

<3 I can't wait for thr second part. :D

<3 Love you Lui.

I read the chapter with the music playing and you're right. It does give more of an emotional impact. I was so close to crying. I had the tears welled up in my eyes, but I had to keep pushing them back.
You have a wonderful talent and I don't want you to stop writing :)

Poor Jacob I can't imagine how he must feel. & Madison..oh boy, I'm happy Paul's there for her though & please update again, I love it!!

hey love the story cant wait for the next update and i hope maddie will open up and forgive jacob

I'm ready, I'm ready!! Ohh I can't wait for the next update!! Hopefully it's soon.

OH MY GOSH. :DDD
I can't WAIT.
And when you asked Are you ready for this? Or something
along those lines, this popped into my head:

DUH NUH NUH NUH NUHH NUHHH_NUHH. The song. >.>

I love the update. It's depressing though because Jacob's behavior reminds me of someone I know. He acts just like him :(
Anyways I can't wait for more :)

.... Oh my gosh. Bring it on.
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My answer: YES I AM READY FOR THIS. I love your chapters, Lui, and I don't know what I would do if you stopped writing. Your stories are magnificent and I hope you never stop doing what you love. Madison is a great character because so many people can relate to her feeling and inner workings, and I love how you personalize everything you do. Giant kudos, sweetheart, and I loved the chapter <3

So, I didn't comment on the last chapter, which was great, by the way, so I will comment now.....another great chapter. I love this story. It was the first one I started to read on Mibba, after I read my daughter's stories, and I was mesmerized with it from the very first chapter and I still am! It is a wonderful story! I love your writing. I was a little worried that you were going to quit writing it after reading one of your author's notes, but I'm so glad you're still writing! :) And to answer your question....are we ready for the next chapter......bring it on!