In Her Eyes Lies Her Heart - Comments

I am so glad you're back but please keep updating

Dang, that's a lot. Glad you came back though.
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Plz update

I really liked it

So I made the Academies gender specific like in the movies, because I can really relate to it. I went to the only Co-Ed private school in my area in highschool, so it really appealed to me to make Hogwarts the only Co-ed school. Plus i loved their entrances in the movie :3

Ooh. That age mention was a nice touch- I had toyed with the idea before, but I never really got it out there. It definitely makes sense then, how she knows Bill and Charlie. It's so cute that Bill has a crush on her. Will they end up together?! I hope they do. It would be the cutest thing ever. Mm...OH. The last chapter- it seemed straight out of the book and I didn't particularly like it. The Hermione/house elf concentration wasn't very interesting.

Yes you are fantastic AWSOME I can't wait until your next update am excited :)

Please continue no one ever finishes Harry Potter fanfic and your is the only bill one that I have hope could probably be updated one I found that I liked hasn't been updated in a year so plz update yours

Your story is excellent plz update soon I beg!!!:) does she not love bill :{ </3 plz update soon am in aww and I want to know who she is??
She must be really powerful to be really old older then mrs. W but still look young:)
You are also very talented I can't wait to read more

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Awe! I love that you began writing again. And I extremely appreciate that your using the books for your inspiration and not the movies. Unfortunately, it's common to use the movies.
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@ celestial_royalty
Im glad you pointed that out, I just reread and fixed some mistakes. Actually a lot of mistakes XD and I deleted a chapter that no longer fit with the plot line I have laid out for the story, so thats why your comment doesnt make sense. I deleted what you had commented on XD thanks for reading :)

You know, my comment below makes no sense to me whatsoever. But it was two years ago. In the first chapter, Harry thought that Eve could be no older than 14 but in the second, he knew that she was 16. Was that a part of the conversation that wasn't revealed?

I was surprised to see that there was only one chapter before- but the prologue was definitely intriguing. I'll look forward to your regular updates.

AAAAhahahhaa your girlfriend is such a lucky gal, having so many men battle for her affection!!! xD

Anyway, lol, your summary is very confusing. I think you meant "her tears for him" or something along those lines at the end? Perhaps if you italicize the top and write an additional summary as to what the story is about, that would draw in more readers. =] There is a little bit of confusion with the whole dream and I think the first chapter could be longer.

I am in no way insinuating that I am qualified to give advice because I am not well-known for my own stories but I can be a very good critic. =] You can also try to make the people sound more...Brit

Remember the beggining of the 4th book?

Was Voldemort in his mind?!
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(: I love it

Thanks For The Heads Up(:

Did I get the poem right? I forgot to save it. :p

Nice! Glad you messaged me.
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