Before It Gets Any Better, We're Headed for a Cliff - Comments

Love it, Paul is such a worry wart but I'm glad tht Hayley got him to sleep tho can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Oh snap, well Paul is pissed the fuck off and I think it's time for the Cullen's to say fuck this treaty shit and let's kill this bastard right now becuz he is crossing the line, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I really like this story and I hate Nessie she is just a jealous bitch, get the fuck over it hoe u have ur own fucking wolf boy named Jacob so be happy and move the fuck on and if u wasn't a fucking vampire bitch I would have punched u in ur damn face and u better hope ur precious daddy saves u before I continue whoopin tht ass, anyhoo did Hayley just tell a vampire tht a werewolf lives in the house meaning she just told a vampire tht Paul lives there and he could possibly kill him, and Paul I wanted to punch the hell out of u from the first chapter to when u and Hayley broke up how stupid do u have to be to realize tht Nessie is literally throwing herself at u and doesn't care tht Jacob is her mate like r u tht slow I mean the signs r there: extra affectionate, extra death glares towards Hayley when Hayley is near u or kisses u, extra giggling and extremely happy yeah tht bitch got it bad for u, but I'm glad u realize tht Hayley wasn't hallucinating about it grant it, it took a kiss for u to realized tht Nessie likes u and ruin ur relationship with Hayley but now u kno the truth, and what's the deal with Jacob and Nessie did Jacob finally kick tht bitch to the curb when he realizes tht she will ruin a perfectly fine friendship and relationship just so tht she can be with someone tht she can't have umm bitch u r an imprint meaning u shouldn't have feelings for anyone else and I will be damned if Paul is Nessie's blood singer becuz thn I'm throwing in more threats to kill tht bitch and honestly Edward u r the worst father/ mind reader ever how do u not kno tht ur daughter is trying to ruin a relationship and her own relationship like u can read fucking minds put tht shit to use thn maybe just maybe this shit wouldn't have happened in the first place maybe if u had taught ur slutty ass daughter to keep her lips and hands off of people tht don't belong to her thn just maybe Hayley wouldn't hate her so much but since u didnt Hayley wants to rip her fucking throat out and watch the expression on her face when she dies so keep tht bitch on a fucking leash and there won't be anymore problems and what the hell is up with these nomads u damn Cullen's aren't doin ur fucking job like I don't kno protect people from gettin hurt, kill the vampires tht roam around the fucking town and think it's ok to kill people when it really isn't like the werewolves r doin their job but there's nothing much they can do but patrol around their turf looking for unwanted vistors tht don't really belong to neither the Cullen's or humans, man can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I hate Nessie- and I'm quite curious as to what Rosalie thinks of the whole thing after all this time. She hasn't seen Haley in quite a while. Months, actually. My favorite lines are...

"my boyfriend was a serious man god dammit, and who was this stranger?" -17.

20: "Just like I know you like Paul does”
“What?” I asked confused.“I patrolled with him for a bit over a month... your favorite color is blue, your bed is comfy as fuck and love camping”

I'm pretty impressed with the somewhat-unique style of their relationship. You kept them apart just long enough, and just close enough not to be overly-cliche. Haley didn't cross the line overly much either way, and Sam and Emily..were awkward on her date. I was a bit confused with the conversation between Sam and Derek, though I didn't go into detail to analyze it, so you might want to consider clarifying that.

i love it and nessie is such a bitch! I like it!

alright all I have to say is that i hate Nessie, that bitch can go die.
But i love the story :D update soon yeah ?

Nice update!

i really like this story its so good:)
i can not wait for the next chapter:)

Love the story!!!!

Please update! =)

Haha I totally got the "he hits me but i love him" vibe from that. but I'm glad the rest of the story won't be that way. It reminded me of this XD
http://pamgutz.livejournal.com/6499.html
LOVE THE STORY :D

i need to see a nessie fightt....... now! :)

I love it! please upload again soon!

I absolutely love it!!!!!!

great update!

it was very nice.

omfg that was so cute! gahh Nessie, that bitch... wth does she think shes doing ? xD
great update

Yes, You should update all the time XD

Can't wait for the next one.

Awww :D

DAMNN. Nessie needs to be arranged into a little... "accident"... >:)

Holy shit I love you so much right now! That was AMAZING!!!! You just made my day!