Before It Gets Any Better, We're Headed for a Cliff - Comments

This is freakin amazing! update soon please

Paul is so sweet. So fucking sweet. I hate him really for all his sweetness. and I really like that Hayley has been great about the whole trying to stay away from him but being friend and all. =D Update soon I love this!

awwwww paul to the rescue! :D

ahhh i feel bad for paul!

I love love love this story!
You need to update like everyday cause I hate waiting for it. Lmaoo.
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ohhhhh Paul is so sweet!
:)
please update

Haha,green eyed paul:P,update as soon as you can please

awesome! update soon ! xx

Awww... poor Paul...

wasnt expecting that, honestly
poor paul :[

*liked it

I really likebiy except yhere were a few grammar mistakes and it would be easier to read if youbmade them into paragraphs, just a suggestion though

It was wonderful and so fucking sweet. I can't believe how cute Paul and Haley are. Derek is kind of weird you know. Like one of those guys in a suit kind of thing. If that makes sense. I usually like the guy who are fighting for the girl from the hero. But I thought Derek was sort of lame. So love Paul~! Update soon!!! It was great. You are great!

I can tell you didn't proofread. Sorry if that sounded bitchy but usually you do have good spelling, grammer, etc...not that I have any room to complain. I'm not the best, which is why I have a beta...

Anyways, I loved the chapter. I like how she went out with Derek and stuff. Emily and Sam made it kind of humerous. That would suck to be on a date and your ex-boyfriend's friends were there.
I like how realistic the breakup is. Some stories when they break up the girl loses all feelings for the guy until the author decides to have them make up. So for them to have that much love and passion when they were together to having it still there but forbidden in a way is cool. You can't expect her to not be turned on if he kissed her. Especially so soon after the breakup.

I want to hear more about Nessie. I always hated when the bitch showed up in earlier chapters but now I want to know the aftermath. Most of the pack must hate her for all the pain Paul is going through for not going out with his imprint anymore. I can only imagion how Jacob is feeling...poor Jake.

Can't wait til next update.

PLKAF

loved the update!!
his girl?..... drama!

That is quite a love triangle... but I love it! :D

I know it was supposed to be sad.. but I thought it was so fucking cute.. >.< Love it.. Update soon! You make me all giddy every time you update! =D

lovee it :D

so shes seeing new people!!
this is gonna end bad i can feel it!

so shes seeing new people!!
this is gonna end bad i can feel it!