The Reification - Comments

Omfg.
Fernando can't dot his letters.
Shay can't dress herself.
Sergio is gay.
Olalla is the devil.
I honestly do not see what else you could add to this beautiful story.
Although...you have quite a few errors. Nothing grammatical, just...I think its word confusion, and its there a fair amount. Such as... me instead of my, or under instead of utter among a handful of others.
I love this story anyway though.
I can't wait for Shay to realize Fernando loves her!

Nice story :) You gave life to the the characters. Love it!

Oooh my God ! I just started reading your story, but I love it ! :D
I'm subscribing ! :D
Good job. :)

Peace, Catriona.

This story is soooo good :D
Can't wait for more!

I was in Daytona Beach with no internet for over a week and this story was one of the few things that I so desperately wanted to read. Another gr8 update, again lol. Can't wait for more! :')

this story is SUPERB and im itching for more.
i love your writing, and your words literally create vivid scenes in my head.
im so excited for the next chapter(:

this is amazing.
its so well written and interesting and goddam i love this story.

LOVING THIS:)

Fernando Torres always been my favorite soccer player, and I enjoy this Fan-fic alot
Shay character is amusing and I really like her, and I;m getting the vibe that Sergio might be crushing on her <333

Your writing is really good and clean cut, Keep Updating :)

great update!
I'm actually glad Shay and Sergio are semi-getting along lol
loved it, can't wait for more!

Lol Nando thought that Shay slept with Sergio... well actually they did, but not in the way that Nando is thinking lol. Update soon!

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee please

YAy you updated this was such an amazing chapter!!!! meanie nando cant wait for more update soon

i can't wait a moment more,
tell me nando, nando, nando :)

YAY!
You updated!
More now.

Omg noooo, awwwwww.
Hahah
I'm glad you update this as well!
More soon!

BAHAHA.
I love Sergio and "dolly" together.
They are pretty funny.
Update soon!

this was such and amazing chapter.
please post more soon:)

Just read this all the way through. It's really good and I can't wait for more. Steamy steamy steamy.

this is awesome!! i love both sergio and nando :) nando and dolce need to hook up already!! keep on updating this is really good