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  • Dame Chance

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    Well, it's pretty good! The only criticism I can give is you sort of need to watch the little things. Like... two instead of to and missing letters from small words? Stuff like that, but I find this plot very enticing. I like the odd combination of Polish and Italian to produce a semi-self conscious yet obviously bright girl. I can't wait for more, it's really a good start :]
    July 28th, 2010 at 04:22am
  • rio lauder can;

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    hmm, I like this so far<3
    July 25th, 2010 at 10:08pm
  • DiorDreams

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    so excited for this!!
    July 25th, 2010 at 09:38pm
  • DiorDreams

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    so excited for this!!
    July 25th, 2010 at 09:38pm
  • DiorDreams

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    so excited for this!!
    July 25th, 2010 at 09:38pm
  • ChloeHarlow

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    ohmygosh, loving this:)
    July 25th, 2010 at 09:36pm
  • Every..Single..Beat

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    like the first chapter!!
    more soon pls!!!
    July 25th, 2010 at 08:36pm
  • Every..Single..Beat

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    like the first chapter!!
    more soon pls!!!
    July 25th, 2010 at 08:36pm
  • drained

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    Sounds really, really good. :D
    July 25th, 2010 at 09:57am
  • SCARYkid

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    This story sounds really interesting :)
    July 25th, 2010 at 07:12am
  • viva la roy;

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    I am loving this so far:)
    July 25th, 2010 at 06:53am
  • parasiempre

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    Great story so far, one thing - fernando plays for liverpool not chelsea, I just saw in your little info box when you search it said "fernando torres from chelsea fc" (:
    July 25th, 2010 at 06:12am
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