You left this on the worst cliffhanger ever. I was just trolling through this site, I'd legit forgotten about it, and found this story again. I used to read it way back when you were regularly updating it, for the first couple of chapters I think. I was sad to see it die and now, returning to it, I'm sad to see that it is still dead. I'm more sad because you are still here and you are still writing. I wasn't going to comment if you had stopped, so I checked. It's always tragic to see a good story die, on this site or any other, and I do still hold a vague hope that you will update eventually.
WOW, uh. It's been a long time, ya? Glad someone on Mibba is picking back up their story. This chapter was mostly so cute with the way Frank was excited to shop for Gerard. The end was worrying. He just got out. Don't blow it now.
This story is amazing. The plot is really well-planned and the effort you put in to writing it really shows. I love the fact Bert's a pretty good guy in this story... at least so far.
This is bloody great - I loved the stuff about the convulsions due to not getting enough blood and stuff, and his enjoyment of raw meat, it made it seem much much more real. Good call there!