Lol that just made me want another chapter so much more. That's the thing will fillers, they're just damn teases. Anyway I'm guessin Mr. Sanders cleaned her up. Oooohhh. Can't wait for the next post.
well she went to the hospital and got cleaned up i wonder how long it will be before m.s. is back in the picture again i hope next chapter! please update soon
Admittedly I did like the previous chapters better but this one was a pretty good filler. :3
I liked how at the end you mentioned how her friend was back to herself when she looked at the sexy doctor. ;D It made me giggle - LOL.
There was a piece of paper that was folded in half and was about the side of my hand. *size of my hand.
Because I doubt a girl could carry your unconscious body across campus, and look at how neatly it is written.” she swayed in her seat when the car turned left.
I don't think the part of it being neat makes it seem logical that a guy would have wrote it. Typically guys don't write neat. LOL. Maybe add onto that; a sane typical girl wouldn't have been able to write you a note that neat without shaking then just leave you there. Something like that because it doesn't seem like a very good point to make on her friend's part.
And that's it. :D <3 Keep doin what you do. [/thishasbeenashittycomment.]
Wow . . . I love it. I like how she didn't just decide , 'oh, I'm gonna take a midnight stroll through the dangerous streets and get my ass killed.' I hate it when the plot starts out like that. I like how you wrote it alot. Keep the posts comin', it's great.