Irrevocably Forever - Comments

This looks REALLY interesting. And I love Grace, she seems really awesome.

I love the banner as well, and the summary.

I like how they met, it was so original it's like this actually happened, and now you're telling the story of your life.

Seriously, this is great. I really enjoy the whole...thing. I don't even know what to say about it , but it's very nice.

Aww the start of a friendship. This was so cute and the little brother that talks a lot and whines and never shits his mouth reminded me of my brother. He's such a booger. Great story.

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The summary was amazing, and I'm absolutely in love with the picture.
The characters, I could actually relate to them, which is kinda rare.
And there isn't to much description, and it's not too choppy. It's so perfect! *subscribes*

I'm kind of at loss for words.
AGLKJLAK
Kay.
This was adorable, alluring, lovely.
It seemed so real, the interactions and whatnot.
GOSH I just loved it.

That was amazing it felt really real :) the character interacted really well :D it was great

… each step an audible scrape against the dirt path we walked on. That’s a huge pet peeve of mine. I would have snapped at him too.

Luke glared at me.

“I thought it was too hot for whining.” haha. That made me giggle <3

I loved this! The way you write dialogue is just so natural and realistic. It’s incredible.
I’m going to subscribe <3

This is cute. I like your writing style, and I love how you kept bringing up "too hot". It made me smile, more than once. :)

When I first read the summary, I was kind of thinking "oh, great, another romance story." If I'm guessing correctly, my assumption was wrong? (I'm mostly just referring to the life-changing aspect tying in with some hokey romance, not a romance that blooms out of something else. does that make sense?) If I'm right, then this story seems like it's going to be a breath of fresh air. If I'm wrong, feel free to ignore this paragraph. :)

You've started off really well, and now you've got me waiting for more.

Okay, I really liked the first chapter.

The dog sounds like one I know, and it made me smile.

Good job on this. Update soon?

This is cute so far. :) I like it a lot.

Lol Sprinkles. Poor dog.

Interesting. I'm excited for an update.
Funny name Sprinkles. Haha. :)

Interesting. I'm excited for an update.
Funny name Sprinkles. Haha. :)

Okay, what I like about this is the fact that it's not a boyfriend/girlfriend changing the main character's life, but a best friend.
Because, I think if we're being honest, friendship impacts a person more than romantic love can, sometimes.
Good concept, for sure.

Ha, I like this person. She said bull shit. Whoever says bullshit is cool in my book.
Can't wait to see the first chapter.

:}

Flshdjkdks.

More. Now. Please. <3

I loved this. It has me really interested! Update soon? I'm subbing. (:

Wonderful job! :D <3

Okay.

So the summary really caught my attention. And I want to read this story. Now. So post chapter one soon?