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  • Hayleyniicole

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    OH HOLY NUGGETS....They are together; Sade and Joshua not Nessa and Rhone...although they should be...hmmm!!!
    Ohh yay, I was so happy with the whole Joshua and Sade thing, that almost don't care about the new Nessa mess. Almost. Holy shit, what the heckens?? Poor Shade, that would be devistating to see....ahhh but we all knew it was going to happen, and no matter what they wanted in the end the truth was there, in plain sight. They are husband and wife. So technically they weren't cheating, but at the same time they were and...ughh. Shit. I feel sorry for Shade but i wanted Nessa and Rhone together to much to really have that care about it. But Joshua and sade....whoa. Hot dayum. That's just....wow....oh holy daisies....eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!!!
    Hmmm...I have the distinct feeling that Nessa is going to blame the whole thing on Rhone, further setting back their inevitable relationship, cause lets face it, their going to end up together, but...It's not going to be made easy. More a test of strength to see if they can handle it to make it to the end result; The marriage...even though they are already married, but you get what i mean...wait i dont know if i get what i mean...ahhhhhh.
    December 15th, 2010 at 06:15am
  • D0miinate

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    Is it wrong of me to say all in all this was my favorite chapter?
    Simply because Rhone and Nessa finally realized how much more they meant to each other than they thought
    Though I do feel bad for Shade, he'll move on(:
    Buuut, yeah, you HAVE to continue this, like, soon
    Becaaause, I get all upset when I have to wait like 3 weeks for an update D;
    December 15th, 2010 at 02:54am
  • GingerGenocide.

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    I feel so bad for shade...
    But it's so sweet!
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    Moreplease! :)
    December 14th, 2010 at 06:46pm
  • seeing stars

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    yaayy! i love the update and the new snowy layout :)) update soon! ♥
    December 14th, 2010 at 05:50pm
  • seeing stars

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    yaayy! i love the update and the new snowy layout :)) update soon! ♥
    December 14th, 2010 at 05:50pm
  • paper castles.

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    I really like the story :) but the moving snow things through the story is really tripping my eyes out so I had to use the default layout
    December 14th, 2010 at 01:14pm
  • The Forest of Dreams

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    LOVE the story!!! Its freakin amazing! Im not a big fan about all the scenes with Josh and Sade, I think their an adorabe gay couple and Sade is just too precious! but I like the story to focus on the main character, Nessa, but thats more of my personal problem then an actual fault in the story lol. Same as I can't read a love book thats entirely in the guys point of view. I just can't get into it but all in all your story is amazingling incredible! lol
    December 13th, 2010 at 12:15am
  • lollypops

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    Love the story :)
    December 9th, 2010 at 03:43pm
  • Oh!

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    Loving it! Just started reading the story, but i had to comment and let you know that you and your story are amazing :)
    December 7th, 2010 at 11:31am
  • IzzyBeth09

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    Oh and I'm to the chapter First Dilemma where Sade wakes up up to Joshua's groin... OMG! I love that so much!!!!!!! I realize that I didn't clarify the chapter...
    December 4th, 2010 at 04:41am
  • IzzyBeth09

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    I'm not even finished with the chapter yet, but I had to stop by and say I love you! I laughed so hard I almost fell out of my computer chair! And that doesn't happen a lot! That and I love how you put the phrase in there 'life would be just ducky.' I love that... you officially just made my day!
    December 4th, 2010 at 04:36am
  • seeing stars

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    i freaking love this story!! it gives me the warm n fuzzies :)) update please!! ♥
    November 23rd, 2010 at 05:51pm
  • hearts-and-stuff

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    please please PLEASE write more! I am in love with this story!
    November 23rd, 2010 at 02:19am
  • Maritttt

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    I love that story but i wanna read more action between rhone and nessa. i'm so sick of this shade jay stuff . It's really boring , and if this keeps up i won't be reading it anymore. I don't tell you that u defenently have to change it. But jeeah, the story would be better if u changed it.
    November 22nd, 2010 at 11:35pm
  • Sugarplumkises

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    DAYM I just got to the end of what is out ATM!!! ANNOYED!!!! I want to read more :( Hehe I love your story it is AMAZING :)
    November 20th, 2010 at 07:58pm
  • I'm Just A Girl

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    omgi love thiisss!! <3 ireally hope sheends up wit rhone =]
    November 18th, 2010 at 10:58pm
  • HAIFISCH

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    YAY!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!
    November 18th, 2010 at 07:08pm
  • Sugarplumkises

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    Just started reading this and I LOVE chapter 7!!! It really brings out the personality of him... XD
    November 18th, 2010 at 12:02pm
  • this.is.bliss.

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    Found this, thanks to KrissParadise, and I'm really loving it. Can't wait for more!!! :)
    November 11th, 2010 at 01:36am
  • hearts-and-stuff

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    great story :)
    not sure if I like Nessa better with Shade cuz he's so sweet or Rhone cuz he's changing just for her... Sade & Joshua are deffinitely my faves though :D
    November 8th, 2010 at 11:50pm