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  • DontGet_It_InMyEye

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    1. I rather read more about what's going to happen to him honestly:/ but I love this story either way((:
    2. I got caught by the police with some friends at 2:30 am
    3. fuckshitgoddammitjesusfuckerpussycockwhoreslutcuntbitch.

    ^^that doesn't count as a repeat!:P
    and I loved this update((:
    October 16th, 2010 at 04:47pm
  • A Pirate's Life

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    motherfuckingcocksuckerpussylickingdickheadbitchshitasswipeskankwhorebastardbollockscockwaffelcumbubblecuntfacedamndickbeatersdipshitdouchebagdumbasshellwhorehoejackasspeckerheadpissflapsprickrimjobschlongtittytwatwanker....
    October 13th, 2010 at 10:15pm
  • the ever so fresh.

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    Aw, poor Oliver. D:
    I love Avery nicknames for him :3

    Anyways...

    1. Time jump? :)

    2. Uh, I went to school looking like a zombie. Nit really that exciting D:.

    3. FuckShitDamnSlagWhoreDickSlutCuntDoucheBitchWankAssCockPussyHellPissSkankBallsBastardCottonHeadedNinnyMuggins. :)
    October 9th, 2010 at 05:31am
  • mandabean116

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    1: Time jumps bug me. I do not like them.

    2: .... My best friend's ex was shat on by a passing seagull..

    3:motherfuckingbitchshitgoddamncuntassanusbastardbullockshobknockerdouchebaghellsatandickpenisrapingfucktardswhorebagskankmuffinJESUSCHRISTALLMIGHTYwhatthepoopstain.....
    October 8th, 2010 at 05:22am
  • nikkisixxsicles

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    YAY! UPDATE!
    Questions!
    1. Do you want to read more about Oliver's recovery & the process of what the heck's gonna happen to him once he's out of the hospital's care, or just do a time jump? I don't like time jumps very much, they make me feel like I've missed a lot.
    2. What's the most interesting thing that's happened to you at school this year? Hmm, nothing very interesting happens to me at school.
    3. String together the longest string of cursewords you can think of, no repeats! The longest/most creative gets a shoutout. :D Oh here we go...
    Bitchslutcuntfaceassholelickerfuckballsnutsackbastarddickheadpissshitgodaids.
    XD
    October 8th, 2010 at 04:04am
  • atypical

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    I feel like I haven't commented in furever...
    But in answer to yr reply last time:
    Yer one of (and, in my opinion, the best of) the producers of Doctor Who's name is Russell T. Davies. Ahaha I've done that so many times, tho. Where you name someone something that sound cool and then someone's like isn't that so and so from *insert some TV show/movie here*.
    And YAYYY I found another Doctor Who lover <3 I love Doctor who so much.

    BACK TO THE STORY:
    Yeesh that little diaphragm thingy seems ridiculously painful....
    The doctor kinda pisses me off. Just sayin XD
    Avery is so cute <3 He wants to help but he's so clueless...
    October 7th, 2010 at 01:34am
  • ColorMeArtistic

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    I think, maybe, I might have to agree with the person above me ^^?
    October 6th, 2010 at 11:32pm
  • cookieZZ

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    love the update! :D WAS ABOUT TIME~!

    Aaaaand, I wouldn't mind some hospital smex bwahahah ;P
    October 6th, 2010 at 10:06pm
  • rawryourself

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    I want to know what happens why he gets out of the hospital but this recovery stuff is kinda boring. A time jump would be great if you did a small flashback to him getting situated and whatnot.
    October 6th, 2010 at 06:48am
  • Tattoo

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    Thanks for updating :)
    October 6th, 2010 at 06:24am
  • Snowfall Melody

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    awesome chapter.
    1. If this is just a hobby: time jump
    If not and you want to get it published you should continue with his recovery
    October 6th, 2010 at 03:31am
  • understand

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    1. D: i can't make that kind of decision!
    2. i can't even think of something... that's how lame i am
    3. lol this takes too much energy :]
    October 6th, 2010 at 03:13am
  • miss monti

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    1. Predictions predictions! - He'll move in with Avery...?
    2. Do you hate the feeling of waking up after anesthesia? I know I do. - I wouldn't know.
    3. What's a weird habit you have? Mine is playing with my hair excessively. :P - I make really weird faces all the time. haha.

    THE CLIFFY, IT HURTS.
    D:
    September 20th, 2010 at 06:27am
  • miss monti

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    1. What's a talent that you have? (Don't say you have no talent, everyone has some talent. Even if it's being really good at painting nails or finding good deals at Hot Topic. That's talent.) - I'm good at making biscuits and I'm really good at hiding my feelings. I don't know if that last one is a talent though :\
    2. Do you prefer lengthy chapters without much action, or short chapters with more actions/cliffhangers? :P - I like a mix of both :)

    IS HE GONNA WAKE UP???
    Oh, he better or I'm gonna be sad D':

    PS. I'm going to enter your contest :)
    September 20th, 2010 at 06:22am
  • miss monti

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    1. What's the one sense you would miss most if you suddenly lost all of them? - Probably hearing. Music means so much to me and I honestly don't know what I'd do without it.
    2. Would you rather be blind or deaf? - blind, refer to answer above.
    3. Would you rather lose your sense of touch or taste? - taste. I like being able to feel things and touch them.

    Oli D:
    Oh dear, dear, dear.
    September 20th, 2010 at 06:07am
  • miss monti

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    1. Have you ever visited someone in an ICU? I've only done it once, and it was a while back, so methods could have changed. XP - No I haven't, but my mommy is a nurse and that's how it goes down where she works. Except you don't always have to have the anti-bacteria spray thingy done.
    2. Have you ever BEEN in the ICU? I have, only once. :P - no, I haven't
    3. Do you believe that if someone is in a coma, they can still hear what you're saying? - yes.

    I'm glad you liked my poetry, hahah
    :)

    Oh my goodness, poor oliver and Avery D:
    I can't imagine what Avery is going through in the slightest.
    I hope Oli wakes up soon.
    <3333
    September 20th, 2010 at 05:31am
  • mandabean116

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    Lolo woke up <3 That makes me happy ^_^
    September 20th, 2010 at 03:13am
  • boyking

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    Oh God.
    Seriously, I'm so nervous/excited for the next update.
    I hope that he doesn't have to move!
    Oh, and can I just stress how amazing this story is? :3
    You're very good at describing things, and making it realistic.

    An annoying habit of mine is that I always play with my hair, and fix my bangs. :/
    September 19th, 2010 at 07:46pm
  • words as weapons

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    I love this story
    umm my habit is tapping or humming
    September 19th, 2010 at 03:37am
  • DontGet_It_InMyEye

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    Lemme just start by saying this story is perfectly written and absolutely awesome!!!:D

    Now I will answer your questions haha
    1.I don't really have a prediction other than sheer amazingness:D
    2.I've never experienced it...?
    3.I have a habit of standing on the sides of my feet rather than the bottoms when I'm bored:P
    September 19th, 2010 at 03:00am