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  • Sarah-Beth :D

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    He woke up, he woke up, he woke up! :D *dances*
    You have no idea how happy that made me!
    But no, you don't want me to be happy, do you? 'Cause now he might have to go live with his relative in freaking MISSOURI!
    Way to go random with that one. I wouldn't have picked Missouri. I would've picked somewhere practical, like Oregon. Wait, that's worse than Missouri xD
    Oliver's what, seventeen? So it would only be a year, right?? That doesn't sound too bad... Still, I don't like it! What happened with us being on the same page?
    I'm sad now ]:
    But anyhoo! I loved the update[:
    I'm just happy he woke up, and I am STILL waiting for the skipping off into the sunset with rainbows and unicorns! ;D
    Can't wait for more! :D
    September 18th, 2010 at 12:19am
  • DWritesSometimes

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    1) I don't know what's gonna happen (Cuz I'm not all that creative) but i need to know so update soon, k?

    2)I've never had anesthesia (OMG so many misspellings *face palm*)

    3) I bite my bottom lip when I'm thinking or if I'm around someone that makes me happy :D
    September 17th, 2010 at 01:15pm
  • One Direction.

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    Noooo he can't move :( I want him to live with Avery!(: never had anesthesia buuuut I feel weird after I wake up from a benadryl induced sleep! :p bad habit? I bite my fingers… yup yup! && I have really mean thoughts about people sometimes, I feel like it's mind tourettes.
    September 17th, 2010 at 05:57am
  • the ever so fresh.

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    Oh no! D:
    I hope he doesn't move.
    D:D:D:D:D:D:

    I wanna join your contest!
    I'll see how far I can push my artistic abilities.
    :)
    September 17th, 2010 at 03:27am
  • River0127

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    Questionssssss...
    1) I think Oliver will end up moving away and THEN he will move in with Avery and is mom.
    2) Never been under anesthesia before O.o
    3) I have a lot of weird habits lol, mostly fidgeting and doodling ALL over my homework.
    September 17th, 2010 at 01:44am
  • rawryourself

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    If I had time, I would enter your contest, because I really really want to. Buuutttt, school's taking up my time. Blah.

    Haha, I guess I set myself up for that one.
    Hmm....He's gonna move in with Avery. Or Avery's gonna move with Oliver. Or, Oliver's gonna move and then when he turns 18 he'll move back. No matter what happens though they're gonna stay together.
    I've never been under anesthesia. I will sometime soon though because my wisdom teeth are getting ripped out.
    I play with my hair a lot as well as chewing on my lip.
    September 17th, 2010 at 12:30am
  • xxfallenangel48xx

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    lol people call me crazy but i have two weird habits and they r that i love chewing on human skin and anything foam. i feel bad for my friends and my boyfriend cause they get the brunt of all my chewing.
    September 16th, 2010 at 10:43pm
  • nikkisixxsicles

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    Yay!
    NO!
    D:
    Questions!
    1. Predictions predictions! I don't have any D: I just hope he doesn't move
    2. Do you hate the feeling of waking up after anesthesia? I ALWAYS hate the feeling of waking up.
    3. What's a weird habit you have? I have too many to count :P
    September 16th, 2010 at 05:18am
  • Tattoo

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    Oh no :(

    Questions!
    1. I really am hoping that Avery's mom will let Oliver stay with them so he won't have to go all the way to Missouri.

    2. I don't think I've ever really been under anesthesia, so I wouldn't really know.

    3. I play with my hair a lot and I play with my piercings a lot. Especially my stretched ears.

    Thanks for updating :)
    September 16th, 2010 at 04:46am
  • Snowfall Melody

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    WOW . . . Sadness :(
    September 16th, 2010 at 03:58am
  • Emochick920

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    Oli. Cant. Leave. I wont let him.
    September 16th, 2010 at 03:56am
  • Katieeelove

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    Avery will take Oliver in and they will live happily unitl the end of time.
    They have to.

    I wiggle my feet a lot and when I concentrate my tongue sticks out.
    AND YOU LIKE DOCTOR WHO?!
    September 16th, 2010 at 03:29am
  • ImaMunstah

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    Ohshit. o.0
    September 16th, 2010 at 03:27am
  • bones n' feathers.

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    rofl what do u want me to update in? :P lol xD
    September 16th, 2010 at 03:24am
  • understand

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    they just keep having problem after problem
    September 16th, 2010 at 03:19am
  • atypical

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    OHMYGOD this is amazing. But really...You HAD to stop THERE? I was like YESSS he's waking up and then there were...no more chapters. I was like #$%^&*(.

    I shall wait impatiently until you update XD

    (waiting impatiently doesn't really make sense...)
    September 15th, 2010 at 01:54am
  • atypical

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    WHOAAA hold on. I started reading this (I stopped in the middle of chap one to ask this) and it said there was a guy named Russell Davies. Is that an accidental Doctor Who reference or no? Because Doctor Who has a producer named Russell T Davies... I was just wondering XD

    I'll comment again when I'm done reading it <3
    September 14th, 2010 at 11:12pm
  • missmuffinpantsx

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    New reader/commenter :))

    1. What's a talent that you have? (Don't say you have no talent, everyone has some talent. Even if it's being really good at painting nails or finding good deals at Hot Topic. That's talent.)
    Erm...I'm told I'm a pretty good singer. I don't fully agree with that but whatever.
    Anddd I'm bomb at making people smile no matter whaaaat. xD
    2. Do you prefer lengthy chapters without much action, or short chapters with more actions/cliffhangers?
    Depends really. Because sometimes a long chapter with not a lot of action you can learn a lot about whats going on and the characters feelings, thoughts, and reasons why they do certain things.
    But the short ones with action/cliffhangers keeps things interesting and keeps readers on their toes.

    Like RIGHT NOW! I'm dying to see what happens to Oliver!
    And poor Avery! I just wanna grab him up in a big hug and nevahevah let him go!

    Oh! And major props for the Mardi Gras beads simile in the last Oliver's point of view chapter. Made this lil cajun girls night, baybeeee. xD
    September 14th, 2010 at 06:52am
  • xxfallenangel48xx

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    awwww poor oliver. i feel so bad for him but at least his dad is gone now. i like lengthy chapters with lots of action. and my talent is turning guys gay after breaking up with him. all of my ex's have turned gay after they dated me and my current boyfriend told me he was bi around the start of our relationship. so i guess i just love gay guys so much that they r attracted to me lol.
    September 14th, 2010 at 04:08am
  • rawryourself

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    Apparently I'm good at art and sports. Or so I'm told. I don't really agree with the art....
    I like a mix of the two. Kinda long but not so long that it gets boring but long enough that it has detail (:
    September 13th, 2010 at 11:50pm