Not bad so far, I like it. Good luck writing British slang I whole heartily attempt I couldn't do it..
Hopefulrissia (very good writer )has a story chasing chaos I have a ton more ill have to look but that one sticks out, its finshed but there is a follow up( over and done).
Comment virginity is mine, thank you. ;D This story is going to go places, I can feel it. I loved the layout and it was really well written. I'm really excited to see more.
This story is my new addiction.
Update when you can
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