July 18th, 2012 at 12:16pm
Hey :)
This comment may be kind of weird, because first: I'm flashed by the story, second: I'm German and so my english might suck and third: There is pretty much to say in my head, but I guess, I won't find words for the half of it. But let's get this thing started.
I loved the story. It was really... fascinating.
I mean, it isn't that special when you think about the plot, the storyline and so. Just a sweet, little lovestory, which the reader just have to love because it's that ... great.
I think the title is great.
So easy to love
Could mean that loving is easy or that someone is easy to love. In end I wouldn't dare saying that this story has a meaning which is called: Loving is easy, because it surely isn't between Blair and Oliver. But I always liked the idea of a title which isn't that clear and gives the reader the opportunity to interpret somethings.
I have to admit, that this story was for me the reason for being on mibba. I found the translation of a german girl on myfanfiction, but she doesn't translate more than chapter eight and I really wanted to read more, because Oli and Blair... they were kind of contagious. I need to know their whole story. So yesterday I found the german story and then the english one and today I finished them. It's really sad that you don't write a sequal. I would love to read me, get to know how they work with each other and in this relationship. But it's the authors choice, I guess.
So...
coming up to the characters.
Blair:
She is kinda cute. A clumsy, afraid, cute person which is so easy to love. I do like her more than I like 'Mary', even though I have to confess that Mary is kinda funnier. But Blair's thoughts were always more my taste. [This sentence would make sense in german, I don't know how it make sense in english...] The only thing that bothered me about Blair is that she took that long to get angry. I understand, she is a person who runs away from fights and arguments, but this jerk - Oli - does hurt her every single minute and she doesn't even get angry. So the scene when Oli comes to talk to her and she is the one who walks away or the scene when she runs to the stage, asking him why he hates her, are kind of my favorite. So, that's about Blair.
Oli...
Oli, Oli, Oli.
He is kind of ... exhausting. He is cute. And he worries about Blair [I loved the scene when she loses her backstagepass and he freaks out after she has this fear attack(?).] But he is so destroying this whole thing every minute. If he loves Blair - no matter if he wanna give it shot or not - how could he possibly fuck other girls and let her know of it? That's so ... not fair. I really tried to hate him for that. Doesn't work that much. In the end he seems to be even more afraid than Blair is. I kinda like that part of him.
Tom!
My hero of the story.
Gosh, I love this guy. He is so great.
I ... whoooa.
You see, I'm kinda freaking about him. But he is sooo much greater than Oli in this story and there were a few moments when I thought he would be in love with Blair - and I still thinking about it - but he is surely the best friend for her. And I do fall for the best friends most of the time. So, great, really great!
What's left to say?
I liked the british accent, even though it's harder to read for a german girl like me than the american 'normal' english is by itself. But I liked it a lot although.
And about the happy end... they do deserve it, but I probably appreciate a sad, dramatic ending more. It's kind of crazy that I write this right now, because most likely I would hate you for writing one. xD So there is a part of me which is happy now with having blair and oli happy, and a part of me that had expected a little more drama... a fight or something and Oli kisses her or somthing like that to keep her mouth shout... sounds like a happy end, doesn't it?
Well, I do finish my comment now, because I think the most I wrote is rubbish and grammatically not correct, but I hope you see that I've tried and know that I loved your story.
Greets,
heartwhisper[Kira]
P.S. My comments in german are actually better than this one. Sorry. ;D
I loved this. It is completely amazing! I love the bond between Tom and Blair too. It makes me curious as to how strong there bond will be when he finds out Oliver and Blair are together. Will he be upset, angry, or happy for them? I have so many questions I want to know but you kind of left it for our imagination to settle on what happens to them in the future. Great Story!