Paparazzi - Comments

Hi, I'm from Comment Swap and I must say that this is a really good story! I'm not a big fan of The Joker (I've actually never seen a Batman movie) but I really liked this story :) good job!

Hello, Comment Swap!
I won't lie, I was worried when I saw that the story's title was Paparazzi, but hello Joker fanfic!!
I like the first paragraph describing everything the day was for Victoria, but some of the wording/grammar is off--you might want to read over that. Sometimes you also change the verb tense unnecessarily, which can be confusing.
The plot is brilliant, though. It most definitely draws you in, and I love the obsession in Victoria--it's becoming clear that this isn't really a normal thing for a teenager to do and that perhaps she isn't an entirely normal girl.

Why'd it stop? :( I thought there were two more chapters!

I really like this so far, it's such an interesting prospect and really unique - I like the whole photograph plotline, it makes things so original.

I laugh a bit when The Joker posed for Victoria, I must admit. XD I can actually imagine him doing something like that, haha.

Your comment about Victoria generally representing every fangirl was interesting, because it's pretty damn true. I'm sure a lot of girls would react like that if given the oppurtunity. Alas, it is not to be.

You portrayed The Joker pretty well, I could imagine his voice saying the dialouge pretty clearly and it was all very true to his character. Especially the: "You are not... In love with me." The way you described how he said it was perfect, what with the little laugh and then the low growl.

Anyway, I loved this a lot, and I have subscribed, eagerly awaiting a possible update...? :)

Hi,I'm here from comment swap-sorry it took so long to say anything-I see you already have a sequel up too! :C.
While I'm not a huge fan of Batman or The Joker,I really enjoyed your story. It was interesting right away and pulled you in,making you read the whole thing in one sitting. :) Your story also flowed easily with no problems,or no grammar or other little problems. :) my only complaint-which could just be me-is the backround made it a little hard for me to read,but i think thats just me. :) Besides that,I was really impressed by your story,even though I'm not a fan,and I already started your sequal. :) Can't wait to read whatelse you put out-good job. :)

I AM IN LOVE WITH THE JOKER! Is it creepy I can read what he says in his voice? I have watched The Dark Knight so much I know his voice by heart. Mhhhmmm. The Joker is mighty sexy and I'm so excited to read the rest of this. I am very thankful for the Comment Swap. If it wasn't for that, I would have never found this amazing story. You are an excellent author. I am quite jealous of your talent. :) Keep up the fantastic work and I'll keep reading. Now, to recommend and subscribe.

Comment swapper, here ! This really isn't exactly my scene ... I don't watch Batman, or know anything about it, and it seems weird to me that there's a romantic spin? But ignoring that, when I attempted to read it; it's very well written and a good story line if I pretend that they aren't people I don't know about. xD Keep it up !

Wow, I mean, WOW! that was so interesting, not really something I usually would have read, but I must say I was impressed. Very well written and Deffinatly better then I thought it would be, Well done :)

This story is pretty interesting. I've never really thought of the joker in any romantic way but, you made this really realistic and believable. The part about her breaking his psyche down was pretty cool and it really shows when he moved her into the cleaner room.

I really love the idea of the story because I've never read a Batman/Joker story before. The only thing I would really change though is the layout because quite frankly it's hard to read and it doesn't really draw the reader into reading the story. The narration is a tad boring at times and can drag on and at times the characters could use a little bit more background than what you have provided. But otherwise, It's great! Keep writing(; xoxo

This story is really original, love it(:

I think your plot is really interesting. It's pretty unique and not something you see every day. Props for that! One thing I will comment on though, is that the writing is pretty superficial. There's no further description of Victoria, her surroundings or her feelings. The narrator seems to be a fly on the wall just telling the reader what's happening. It would be nice to know what Victoria is thinking and feeling. Otherwise, great job! Keep it up! :)

Cherries! xx

I loveee Joker stories (hence why i wrote one) and this seems pretty individual, just going from the first chapter itself! Your writing style is also very easy to follow- although I would love more of an introduction into Victoria herself ( although you may be leaving that ambigious for a reason?) ahaa- either way I really like it :D

This is the first Batman/Joker story I've read, but I think this idea is really original. With the exception of a few spelling errors, it's also very well written. I really like how you've set a five chapter limit on it, I'm so bad at keeping my stories concise, lol. Maybe I should make a chapter limit for my stories...

Anyway. I enjoyed this story that I otherwise wouldn't have chosen to read. This makes me think I should try some stories that I wouldn't normally read. Thank you for that. It's very well done, and I would recommend continuing.

I love this story. I am here because of the comment swap thing and it is something I personally wouldn't have picked to read if it wasn't for it. That being said I have to say I'm glad I read it. This was very intriguing in the way you write and describe the Joker. Your description of him is perfect. Also the story line isn't very cliche... I hope you post more

This story is one of the reasons I love the new Comment Swap function. I never would have picked a Joker story myself, even though I have a soft spot for him. He's such an intriguing character. But I'm definitely glad I found this. The way you write is easy to follow and to read. And the way you describe The Joker is pretty spot on to me. Really good job on this story, I hope you'll post the rest of it as well!

I have to be honest, I got here through comment swap and this story is really not something I, myself would read. I'm not saying it is bad! I read the first chapter and I really like it, especially the way you write. Though, I gotta have to say the layout really bothers me. i think for most people it looks different, but I have a really small screen and the background picture of the eyes is halfway over the text, making it almost impossible to read...

This is great! Can't wait for the next chapters :D

I love it
Your story's positively splendid ^^
Can't wait for more
<3

Whooo!

That was amazingly, amazing.
Keep it up!

:)