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  • thisafterlife

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    Nikkita was a hopeless romantic; she always had been. She chose to ignore all the negative stories she heard about marriage and relationships, and instead she focused on the stories that made happy, hopeful tears well her eyes and a swoon come from her mouth. She loved seeing elderly couples who still held hands as they took walks together, couples who snuck polite, short kisses in public when they thought no one else was looking, and partners who stared longingly into each other’s eyes – the rest of the world completely gone.

    this is absolutely me in every aspect of my personality; you seriously hit the nail on the head here, and those are all the things that i love/want most in relationships!

    She met Lucas, who had now been her boyfriend for a little over two years, in the huge library of the huge St. Louis area university she had gone to. Their eyes locked on each other from a few tables away, and as she ducked her gaze down and blushed

    ugh, swooning so bad right now. i love the name, love how we met, it's so absolutely perfect.

    Lucas stepped out of the master bathroom, dressed in one of his work suits and his brown hair styled perfectly into a messy look.

    oh, luke-baby <3

    Tying it up with a clip, she did her makeup, trying her best to make her brown eyes pop. She wasn’t sure if it was just her or if all girls with brown eyes had the same problem, but they always looked so dull.

    STORY OF MY LIFE ='[[[[[

    “Well, shit,” she mumbled, pulling the buds out of her airs and setting her iPod inside the beach bag she had brought with her.

    oh, my god, this is so me that it's almost scary.

    Her eyes fell to his chest, a tattoo that said ‘hockey’ over his left pectoral, two hockey sticks crossed behind the words.

    fucking FACE-PALM

    “That’s why I’m with you,” she commented before taking a bite of her pasta and sending Lucas a smile as he laughed heartily and lightly touched her hand with his index finger in a show of affection as he locked his hazel eyes with her brown ones, making Nikkita’s heart swell in her chest and her smile stretch even wider.

    oh, lucas, why you gotta make me swoon this much, buddy?

    ughhhh, alyssa, this is pure love <3 i honestly cannot thank you enough for writing this for me, i'm so thankful and grateful and appreciative; i love the way that this is written and how miniscule tj is right now. just a boy at the pool who ruined my book, and i have no idea that he's going to change everything. i love how you honestly got me so well, you captured me perfectly without any faults and i love that i worked at a police station before!! so exciting!

    i love you and this and tj and i can't wait for more <3 thank you so much for this, alyssa. you have no idea how thankful i am.
    August 12th, 2010 at 10:10am
  • mully17

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    Awww TJ Oshie is FINE!!!! Can't wait to see where this goes
    August 12th, 2010 at 09:27am
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    Awww TJ Oshie is FINE!!!! Can't wait to see where this goes
    August 12th, 2010 at 09:27am
  • laceybebe

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    uhm...yayyyy!
    i am very excited for this story.
    there are not enough really great teej stories on here and i just know that this is going to be amazing :)
    August 6th, 2010 at 01:17am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    can't wait for this!
    July 28th, 2010 at 10:50pm
  • Jon Toews

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    cant waitt<3
    July 28th, 2010 at 02:13am
  • thisafterlife

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    i'm so excited <3 thank you, love, so much for this =*
    July 28th, 2010 at 12:59am