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  • Maddi;

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    I enjoyed reading this so much! I love that Lucas is actually a good boyfriend to Nikkita instead of not really caring about her. I do feel bad that they don't get to see each other that often and I feel like that really puts a strain on their relationship, especially with TJ coming in and being so sweet and charming to her. It's so cute because you can just tell that she ahasn't gotten that kind of attention from a guy in a while with Lucas always being so busy, so it's a nice change of pace for her. I think this story is so amazing and I love it!
    June 27th, 2013 at 10:46pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I'm so bummed this is over! But it was an amazing ending! <3
    November 26th, 2011 at 04:59am
  • samlo

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    Aww. I just got the chance to read the final chapter. I had to go back and reread the whole story. I'm sad to see this end. I'm glad that they finally admitted their feeling to not only themselves but to each other too.

    I hope you write another Oshie story. I loved how you captured his personality. Sweet, and dorky. :)

    And how can you not love TJ? Isn't that like sacreligious or something? He is just too adorable to not love. :)
    November 17th, 2011 at 08:41am
  • AndreaOhh219

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    TJ is like my 3rd cousin, i can't believe he has fanfiction aha
    November 6th, 2011 at 07:53am
  • Dee Flyrs Grl

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    Hate to see this end, but absolutely loved it!
    They were too cute together!
    Great job!
    November 4th, 2011 at 08:03pm
  • gipsy danger.

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    Oh noooo it's over! It makes me so sad! But it was absolutely AMAZING! I loved the entire story from start to finish. How you write, it absolutely blows my mind, it's so good! I love all the detail and how in depth everything is! This story had me hooked! And the last chapter was perfect and steamy! TJ and Kita are adorable together! I just - I LOVED IT!
    November 4th, 2011 at 01:59am
  • NMT82

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    Great story, awesome ending. Great writing, thanks for sharing your story.

    Hope you and your BFF have much happiness and success.
    November 3rd, 2011 at 06:23pm
  • thisafterlife

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    okay so i'm on my iPhone right now so excuse any typos or shameful autocorrects that may find their way into my comment right now!

    first and foremost, i can never thank you enough for writing this beautiful story for me. i know that i've said it before and we've talked endlessly about how grateful i truly am, but i really do want you to know that i appreciate every single thing you have done for me, whether it's this story or the countless over things that you've helped me with and supported me through since we became friends. you are completely amazing, and i am proud to be your friend <3

    there will never come a time when i forget the night when you got me to admit my love for t.j. oshie. after months of me attempting to dislike the little shit, you saw that obviously i was loving him with every passing insult. ONLY YOU COULD MAKE IT HAPPEN. ever since, it's been such a natural thing and it's all your fault ;] but i would not have it any other way, honestly. just like this story couldn't have been written any better, because you made it completely perfect from beginning to end.

    you wrote t.j. so perfectly, alyssa. you captured his boyish charm but somehow showed us that he was just waiting for the perfect moment to show how truly mature he was. you have created the best oshie story on this website, and i would feel that way even if it weren't for me. you ended it perfectly, even showin how a relationship with t.j. just cannot be planned or normal; oddness gravitates toward him, but in the most wonderful ways. i love it with all my heart, and i love you, wife <3 you are truly a great friend and writer, and i am always grateful for anything that you write. whether it's for me, for somebody else, or just for fun. thank you so much for this <3
    November 3rd, 2011 at 04:39pm
  • abearbear

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    Are you going to continue writing this?
    October 20th, 2011 at 12:28am
  • Dee Flyrs Grl

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    Glad they're finally together!
    Can't wait to read the wedding!
    August 12th, 2011 at 04:16am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Yay! Loved that one!
    SO glad she chose Teej!
    Looking forward to more! <3
    August 2nd, 2011 at 07:04am
  • gipsy danger.

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    Yes! I am so happy that Lucas is out of the picture, at least for now. I have been waiting for Kita to break up with him. And oh TJ, why is he so perfect? Waiting for her to be ready is too sweet and understanding. I just want to hug him, I really do. I loved the chapter, it was amazing!
    July 27th, 2011 at 03:05pm
  • helloxellen

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    yyyeeeeeeeesss,<3.

    Amazing :).
    July 27th, 2011 at 08:16am
  • magznmo

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    yay they'r finally together :) is there gonna be a tj vs. lucas fight? lol keep updating
    July 27th, 2011 at 07:09am
  • NMT82

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    Yea Kita and TJ are finally together!! Great update, lookinf forword to reading about the wedding.
    July 27th, 2011 at 06:41am
  • abearbear

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    I loved this chapter because she finally chose TJ ahh so excited!
    July 27th, 2011 at 02:48am
  • pineapple55

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    i still love this story! can't wait to see the wedding! cam is so cute with alyssa and james.
    July 27th, 2011 at 02:32am
  • sportychick40

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    FINALLY!!!! I was wondering if you were ever going to update ever again!
    July 27th, 2011 at 02:21am
  • sportychick40

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    FINALLY!!!! I was wondering if you were ever going to update ever again!
    July 27th, 2011 at 02:20am
  • sportychick40

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    FINALLY!!!! I was wondering if you were ever going to update ever again!
    July 27th, 2011 at 02:19am
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