January 18th, 2011 at 01:19am
I'm not even gonna lie- I had tears in my eyes at the end of this chapter :') I'm such a wuss.
Although, at the start I was seeing flower Max with his pink petals... >< haha!
I'm severely displeased with his conduct!!! And I hate Brielle with the fire of a thousand suns. Why be such a bitch? It's so much effort wasted on just being a reprehensible person, a useless specimen.
Blech >___<
Urm, a couple notes.
In the second paragraph you say Not since that say at the mall, and so I break into a grin. That should be day. It's so cruel how keyboard makers put those letters so close together, that's like my most common typo ever!!! :@
Also, there is some mistake here- I’m hungry; And it’s never given me such relief but I'm not sure whether you meant that to be all one sentence (in which case no capital and ofc and I think a comma might be better then a semi colon in that case) or two separate clauses...?
I love Rafe. He's so obviously the better choice for Charlie (also, she gets called both Charlie and lex, which confuses me! I think Lex is the name of her heart, personally ) although as I said before he is also very much in the friend category of guys, which is a shame.
But of course he wants more! :D
Thank you for another wonderful chapter :)
I can really relate to Lex - namely now as I read this story in bed haha.