If I do remember correctly, Gizelle is suppose to me, yes? Her indifference to the popo seems very...me-like. (If my memory is whack and I got the person wrong, my bad.) I know you made someone like me in this story though!
I don't like Dixy one bit.... Update soon please!!!!! :D And when I need help getting ideas, I put my ipod on shuffle and let the lyrics of the songs help me write! (Singing also helps too sometimes lol!!)
I knew that coach was a creeper!! xD And no worries I've been gone for like a super duper long time too so I'm behind on all of the stories I subscribed to :o! Lol!!
OMG!!! I'm soooooo sorry that I haven't been able to comment or anything!!!! I've been so focused on school and everything and I'm JUST starting to catch up on all of the stories I subscribed to!!! Please update soon!!! I really like this story and I already have two suspects as to who might have committed this awful deed against Kelsey!!!
Yay!!! I get the first comment!!! I love your story so far keep it up!! That gym teacher sounds a bit shady to me :o I like Max so far he sounds interesting!! Update soon :)