Oh this chapter gave me chills. The way you described her pain that night was so real. I could see it playing out before me. Well done. Your description still gets me; some of the best I've seen. I cannot wait to see where you take her next chapter Home will be interesting to see Again, poor Matt and McKenna. Wonderful job, dear.
Great update :) It makes me sad to see Peyton pushing everyone aside like that. I know that she feels like a burden to them, but she's not. They really want to help her because they care about her especially Matt. I really hoping that maybe McKenna will tell Matt what happened with Peyton. Because I'm afraid that Peyton will do something real bad to herself and Matt won't be there to help her in time.
I can't believe she told McKenna to go away, that poor girl, she was just trying to help a girl out. I know it's hard to see through the haze but I just wish she would let Matt help her because she just needs to believe in herself. She's so happy with Matt, he's happy with her. Ugh I want them to work so bad. -S
I really hope this doesnt set Peyton back any further than she is, I hope she realizes that she can trust Matt despite her recent episode and realization. He will help her if she just lets him in, yea she told him her past but she needs to let her guard fully down and just let Matt be there for her. Im afraid that the next time that will happen its because she's on the verge of death and Matt is just barely getting there in time for a chance for her to survive, im praying she doesnt let it get that far. I really think that Kenna should tell Matt what happened with Peyton, maybe that will help him realize what's going on.
I love this story a lot. I started reading it over the weekend and I love that it has a real person with real problems. Not some superficial girl who has nothing wrong in her life. This is a breath of fresh air to say. I hope that she can start to trust matt and quit hurting herself. If not for matt but for Brian's sister, i mean come on she needs someone to look up to. I love this still. -S
Peyton is really getting me annoyed with her pesimisstic attitude...she' soo blind or chooses to be blind to the fact that there are people that are willing to help her out.
Poor Peyton..I thought that after she open up with Matt about everything that it would help her, but it didn't. Now Peyton thinks that she won't ever be able to get better. I really hope she doesn't give up. I really believe that Matt will be her miracle if she just lets him. she's not alone is this. Everyone wants to help her get better. Great update :)
God I feel so horrible for Peyton, its like nothing is helping her I figure her talking to Matt may have helped but it seems like it just made things worse =( I really hope he realizes what's going on before its too late.
What a powerful update. I'm so glad she opened up to him. Your writing still gives me chills. The way she described the situation just astonished me. Very nice job with this update. It says a lot that she can finally tell Matt these things and let him kiss her.
I don't even know what to say about this chapter. Everything about it just...made me shake. Peyton opening up to Matt was a huge step for her and so was the kiss. I think with Matt kissing her the way he did, he really showed her that he's not going to hurt her. She needs love and Matt is the guy to give it to her the right way.
Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!! They FINALLLLLY kissed! And Peyton let everything out in the open to Matt. About damn time too, I cabt wait to see how it goes from here :) :) update sooooon!
Im so damn proud of Peyton for finally telling Matt about her past, I know it was extremely hard for her. I think now that Matt knows the truth he will be more willing to work with her, even more so than he was before. Im glad he was there to reassure her that it wasnt her fault because I think that her thinking that was what had the biggest impact on her, maybe almost worse that the molestation its self. I loved that they kissed, it was a big step for them and it shows that Peyton trusts Matt now. Awesome update hun!!