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  • DreamingCorpse

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    Update please! I love this!
    August 21st, 2012 at 04:34am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Ughhh, I wish she wouldn't be so freaking stubborn!
    Poor McKenna!
    July 30th, 2012 at 06:03am
  • Johnny Christ;

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    Oh this chapter gave me chills. The way you described her pain that night was so real. I could see it playing out before me. Well done.
    Your description still gets me; some of the best I've seen.
    I cannot wait to see where you take her next chapter
    Home will be interesting to see
    Again, poor Matt and McKenna.
    Wonderful job, dear.
    July 18th, 2012 at 06:21am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Great update :)
    It makes me sad to see Peyton pushing everyone aside like that. I know that she feels like a burden to them, but she's not. They really want to help her because they care about her especially Matt. I really hoping that maybe McKenna will tell Matt what happened with Peyton. Because I'm afraid that Peyton will do something real bad to herself and Matt won't be there to help her in time.
    July 17th, 2012 at 09:00pm
  • wildwiththewind

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    I really like this!
    July 17th, 2012 at 04:43pm
  • Marinesister92

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    I can't believe she told McKenna to go away, that poor girl, she was just trying to help a girl out. I know it's hard to see through the haze but I just wish she would let Matt help her because she just needs to believe in herself. She's so happy with Matt, he's happy with her. Ugh I want them to work so bad.
    -S
    July 17th, 2012 at 02:29pm
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    I really hope this doesnt set Peyton back any further than she is, I hope she realizes that she can trust Matt despite her recent episode and realization. He will help her if she just lets him in, yea she told him her past but she needs to let her guard fully down and just let Matt be there for her. Im afraid that the next time that will happen its because she's on the verge of death and Matt is just barely getting there in time for a chance for her to survive, im praying she doesnt let it get that far. I really think that Kenna should tell Matt what happened with Peyton, maybe that will help him realize what's going on.

    Awesome update hon! =)
    July 17th, 2012 at 10:27am
  • Marinesister92

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    I love this story a lot. I started reading it over the weekend and I love that it has a real person with real problems. Not some superficial girl who has nothing wrong in her life. This is a breath of fresh air to say. I hope that she can start to trust matt and quit hurting herself. If not for matt but for Brian's sister, i mean come on she needs someone to look up to. I love this still.
    -S
    July 16th, 2012 at 05:30pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Matt could be her miracle if she would just let him!
    July 12th, 2012 at 05:35am
  • Lucyy Jayy

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    Peyton is really getting me annoyed with her pesimisstic attitude...she' soo blind or chooses to be blind to the fact that there are people that are willing to help her out.
    July 11th, 2012 at 12:51am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Poor Peyton..I thought that after she open up with Matt about everything that it would help her, but it didn't. Now Peyton thinks that she won't ever be able to get better. I really hope she doesn't give up. I really believe that Matt will be her miracle if she just lets him. she's not alone is this. Everyone wants to help her get better.
    Great update :)
    July 10th, 2012 at 10:55pm
  • mistery gurl

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    maybe matt can be that mirical
    July 10th, 2012 at 12:28pm
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    God I feel so horrible for Peyton, its like nothing is helping her I figure her talking to Matt may have helped but it seems like it just made things worse =( I really hope he realizes what's going on before its too late.

    Awesome update hun! =)
    July 10th, 2012 at 05:46am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Probably my favorite chapter so far! I'm so glad she told him everything and their kiss was so sweet! <3
    June 5th, 2012 at 04:32am
  • happygirl199

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    just found your story and love it!!! can't wait for an update!!!
    June 5th, 2012 at 02:42am
  • synfulnympho

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    So, I just sat up and read this entire story and wasn't going to bed until I finished it. I love this and I can't wait to read more updates.
    June 3rd, 2012 at 09:37am
  • Johnny Christ;

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    What a powerful update. I'm so glad she opened up to him. Your writing still gives me chills.
    The way she described the situation just astonished me. Very nice job with this update. It says a lot that she can finally tell Matt these things and let him kiss her.
    May 30th, 2012 at 05:45pm
  • MamaZ

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    I don't even know what to say about this chapter. Everything about it just...made me shake. Peyton opening up to Matt was a huge step for her and so was the kiss. I think with Matt kissing her the way he did, he really showed her that he's not going to hurt her. She needs love and Matt is the guy to give it to her the right way.
    May 26th, 2012 at 12:59am
  • M-M-MEGAN!

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    Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!! They FINALLLLLY kissed! And Peyton let everything out in the open to Matt. About damn time too, I cabt wait to see how it goes from here :) :)
    update sooooon!
    May 24th, 2012 at 03:19pm
  • DiamondInTheRough.xo

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    Im so damn proud of Peyton for finally telling Matt about her past, I know it was extremely hard for her. I think now that Matt knows the truth he will be more willing to work with her, even more so than he was before. Im glad he was there to reassure her that it wasnt her fault because I think that her thinking that was what had the biggest impact on her, maybe almost worse that the molestation its self. I loved that they kissed, it was a big step for them and it shows that Peyton trusts Matt now. Awesome update hun!! Very Happy
    May 24th, 2012 at 06:07am