Because Of You - Comments

Oh, and maybe just maybe if you can think of it have the people go to a concert in Hershey Park. I went there for a concert once but I never rode the rides but a concert might go well together in this if you can think of a band your characters like and so forth.

Hmm, I think it maybe to early in the relationship for that but it is your story so it is up to you when you put it in.

You really had my hopes up lol....cool update as usual and can't wait for more xoxo

Keep up the good work.

Oh, and if you haven't decided where in PA to go maybe rural PA just for the scenery if you want that or either in Pittburgh or Philadelphia if you want more historical and things to go to. Harrisburg won't be that bad but in rural PA the scenery would be neat for your characters to see if they haven't already seen the scenery in PA.

It's really good.

ive only read the first chapter but this is amazing! love it!

I like the beginning of the story. I will keep reading so dont stop writing.

Your Welcome =] This chapter surprised me a little, I never totally expected Miranda's parents to show up. That made it even better tho. Keep Writing [=

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Aww don't mention it hunni, you always have my support and thank you for your support on my stories :) I love this and can't wait for more as always xoxo

I'm guessing it's Miranda and her new boyfriend? And they either want Rachel or Brandon or both? This chapter was interesting

OOOOHS AWESOMES

Aww that was cute but I want more. Update soon plz hunni xoxo

Imma say... the park? Update soon pweaseeee

Awww ended too soon. I loved this chapter & the previous ones. Now I'mma dream about what happens to Brandon XD Update soon

What? you can't leave it there I really wanna know where they are going although I do have a few suspisions about it lol. Update soon hunni xoxo

Aww loved the chapter and yep Miranda is a bitch glad shes gone for now, i have a feeling we might be seeing her later on. Thanks for the dedication and thank you for updating hehe love it xoxo

Hehe loved the update but why did you leave it there I so need another update like now! lol,

Awesome!

Update soon hunni xoxo

I love this. (: There's no other word to describe it except AWESOME.

Update soon Pleaaaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee. It's too awesome to stop reading, but there was no more.... :( I love it anyways!