I like the idea you are using; as someone else said, it's as original as you can get on Mibba. I think the execution of the idea is solid so far, and I think the character is right on for the story. She's nervous and intimitdated and that's all to be expected.
You have a good writing style and you I really look forward to the updates on this one!
I don't actually listen to the music by the people in this fic, but I really like the idea of this story. I've seen a lot on mibba about Jimmy or "The Rev", and I guess people here loved him heaps. And I thinks this story is really good in the way that it's not only, I think, sort of you "doing him justice" but the storyline and everything. Well, at leat what I think the storyline is going to be.