Made For Each Other - Comments

Fantastic Chapter, as usual, and I can't help but be insanely jealous of Zooey and Jack's perfect relationship. And I am glad she gets along with the guys so well. Keep up the good work!

this is gonna sound really mean but i kind of hope Zooey forgets, so Jack will throw a pancake at her cuz that would be really funny :)

“Jack?”

“Yeah?”

“You’re officially a 10.”

N;AWWWWWWWW. That was so adorable, you are the greatest atl writer ever. (:

I absolutely LOVE this story!
Jack is just so adorable!
Eeeeep!
Update soon!

Yay! I'm so glad they're together now(:
They are the cutest couple in the story! Hands down, haha. Sorry Chloe and Alex! xD
I still love them though.
I really loved this chapter! It wasn't slow on the asking out thing neither was it too fast!
Keep it up(;

And I have a couple questions:
How did you find out that the girl was copying your story? I just went on her formspring today and I'm disgusted by that question she answered about the story. It was obvious she copied.

Also, when in a certain POV, example is Jack's. How do you not have lots of I's in there? I read it, and there's hardly any, but when I read mine, there's like a shit ton of them in there! I really wanna improve my writing and such, so how do I limit on the I's? Just wondering.

Keep it up! I love it(:

I AM LOVING THIS STORY. But, I want you to keep updating desiscions descisions!!!! "the lasting impression" is the only reason I even created a mibba, it inspired me to start writing too! SO PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE updateeeee!

Its so cozy! <3 <3 I love it. It's so sweet to see Jack being--god forbid--mellow. It's so weird that Zooey, the one person that can match him in random bursts of wild energy, is the one person that can really get him to stop and relax and be at total peace. I love that. It's pretty much the truest kind of love you can get, right there. *happy sigh* I'm so happy-happy that you are a writer, you know? You're just...you're just brilliant!

As always, I can't wait to see how this will develop further.

aww that was cuuuuute :) aww just awww thats cuuute :)

I love Jack, he's so sweet and cute at least that side of him. but i do love the other quirky, immature, stupid (acting) self.

i can't wait for another update, and hearing about their breakfast (if thats gonna be in the next chapter.) al though I'm sure that wont be up for a while.

I enjoy that movie selection. Is it weird that I can recite the lines along with The Breakfast Club?
And, they are the cutest couple evar.
Update soon, plz.

d'awww.
cuteness :3

OMG.
Cutest couple in the entire entire world.
:)

Only class from 8-10? that's a rocking schedule. Although, I think I'd like to have class from like, 11-1, then I could sleep in lol. But that's awesome. What's the rest of your schedule like?

Great chapter as always, these two are super duper cute. I love that they are official now.

ohhh i love this. ofcourse i do. i love Jack and Zooey more than anything. For some reason i always end up writing Zack when i try to write Jack. hmmm. maybe i have a kindred love for a certain ATL member with muscular fingers? ehh idk.

haha i lovee thiss. please update!

kdjaslkdjaskdl Okay, so this is just fucking amazing.
I can't wait for more.

Great chapter as usual! They seem so fit for each other since they're both just goofy kids at heart, especially when Zooey gave him an origami flower from her napkin, and he gave her a taquito, or possibly an "overgrown joint" :\ haha

The final scene was my favorite, where she wiped the eyelash off his face and said to make a wish. I loved the dialogue there and how he just simply kissed her instead. It was so sweet :)

I really hope that girl who plagiarized your story doesn't change your outlook on writing. We all love you and what you do, so we'd be devastated if you gave it up :( I guess she deleted her Buzznet though, which is where she had "her" story posted. But that still sucks for you; I can't believe some people lack writing skills so much that they feel the need to steal from others. Ridiculous.

i was really stocked when i knew that u wrote a story 'bout them... i love ur Jack's stories!!!! Probably cause u always cook up some awesome and hilarious dialogues for Jack and his other half. some think that u're a bit dirty minded but i think it's pure creativity. *thumbs up* love the scene where he great Rian half naked-ly, that was pure Jackness. the story is spinning and still churning its best part but i know u got the best stored up somewhere.. probably in jack's pussy. but nvm, back to the sub, love the way first chappy started. they met because of an empty refrigerator! lolz. and lolz again to jack getting whipped so early in the story. and ya, i read bout ur recent author's note. well, i don know what u've decided but i'll be sad if u stop decision decision. stories with great endings are the best. but it's ur choice. i wouldnt like it if my work is plagiarized too. so, whatever u plan to do, i;m cool with it cause well, it's ur story. i hope u wont stop it though cause i'll miss Chloe.... i mean, u got to consider the fact that many of ur readers had stuck with Chloe for a really long time and it wouldnt be fair to leave them hanging. but then again, u so not deserve to be plagarized. i think i'm contradicting myself. anyways, thanks again so much for always writing and letting me read!

p.s: (nod).. the plagiarized title is indeed crappy..

so hopefully you got my coment on your page.
this bitch is going down.
im liek 50 questions in on her formspring.
skanks, fucking skanks.

What the actual fuck. Where's my spear? SOMEONE HAND ME MY SPEAR! This is absolutely unacceptable and I am going to find this lazy bitch and shove my spear up her ass. Unless karma finds her sooner and kicks her in the balls.
Please, please, please keep on updating your stories! I've fallen in love with them (and so have a bunch of people) and will be eternally sad if you stop. :'[
As for the chapter, awesome as usual. So glad they kissed at the end. Hopefully you continue to update soon, plz.

I can't believe that people think they can get away with stealing stories, and then no one find out. I mean, when you have as many readers as you do, it's bound to happen. Now, if it were my stories, I probably wouldn't find out because not many people read them. But even then, it's not yours. Isn't plagiarism illegal or something? I mean, is there anything you can do with her?

Onto the story, great update as usual. The first date was so cute. I think Jack needs someone just as random as he is. It'll help her to understand him better lol.

I understand you needing a break from everything, and hope you will want to update again one day. If not, maybe just make an email list of your readers and email them chapters, but I guess that's still over the internet. People suck sometimes (not you.)

please don't let some stupid girl ruin your writing.
Everyone loves your stories.
And karma's a bitch, it will come back at her.
I love your stories personally and will be sad if they stopped.