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  • dree.

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    I still cannot believe that someone did that to you.
    I loved this, this is adorable.
    Jack is the cutest thing in the world, I loved this.
    don't stress so much gracie, everything will be fine <3
    August 13th, 2010 at 06:05pm
  • ShutUpChristine

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    Um okay, so what the fuck? That's totally fucked up, I'm sorry):
    I SAW that girl on Evan(ATL's sound guy)'s formspring! OH shit! She looks like a bitch..
    I don't have a buzznet account so I couldn't see the "story" on there, and be all like WTF
    But I believe you.. That's totally messed up! Please pretty please don't stop making chapters for Desicions Desicions! Or this one! I love all these stories, and I would be really sad if you stopped. So Please don't stop
    I can't believe that girl would do that...
    Oh, and for the chapter, I loved it as usual! That first date was really cool, so glad they kissed at the end(:
    August 13th, 2010 at 07:30am
  • We Blame BDales.

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    <3 Love this chapter, but that bitch will be hearing some special comments from me.
    August 13th, 2010 at 06:57am
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    cute chapter, i loved the ending it was adorable, oh Jack Zooey makes him human. nah jk.

    and about the plagarism, oh my gosh!!! it makes me so mad when people do that if i met that girl personally i might hit her not kidding, it makes me so mad i cant even rant about it, it makes me that mad! UGH! anyway i hope it doesnt stop you from writing i'll be really sad :( it's okay if you go on hiatus for awhile, just please dont stop it! i really need to know how to Decisions Decisions ends, but no pressure. okay if keep going on about this i might hurt something! seriously it pisses me off!
    August 13th, 2010 at 06:39am
  • hannerbananer

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    “It’s a taquito!” I explained.
    That is my favorite part. Hands down.

    And I would like i comment upon the whole plagirism situation. I know that it has changed your veiws as a writer, but that shouldn't keep you from writing to something so amazing. Just think of how many fans you would be displeasing if you stopped. We all love you and your incredible mind for coming up with such amazing stories. Seriously. I'd be sad if you stopped. Maybe even cry.

    But if you need to, I completely understand if you do, take a break. I'm not saying forget about all of this, but take a break. Chill, relax. Check out some other stories, ya know? I did the same thing when my story got reported for "Beats and tags being out of place/missing." Don't ask what the hell that is, because i dont even know.

    It seems like I'm writing an essay, so I'll just stop now.
    But really, you cannot give up. lots of people are on your side and are going to go harass her now. I can almost promise that. Haha. *looks over at her sister who is on the girls fromspring* yep, told ya we'd harass her. just a bit. Hahahahaha
    August 13th, 2010 at 04:16am
  • MusicMamaE

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    Story comment first.

    That was the best first date anyone could ever hope for. Everything--from the time Jack picked her up to when he dropped her off--was perfectly on key and adorable, and so very Jack & Zooey. I love how easy you paint their relationship, and how excited Jack is to have finally found someone that he could actually keep an interest in, instead of just wham-bam-thankyou-ma'am. And the kiss? Magnificent. It was everything it should have been. Simple, sweet, but totally full of meaning. This chapter, in a nutshell, was perfection.

    Now, onto the serious stuff.

    I understand how you must be feeling right now. I mean, I can only imagine how I'd feel. You and I have in common, I think, that we get involved with our characters wholly; we connect to them, and we make them real. That's what makes you a fantastic writer: The fact that you know your characters inside and out and want people to really see them. You don't want them to be static.
    So with that similarity in mind... If I ever found someone ripping off Annette and Alex or something like that, I'd feel murderous. I'd be too angry to speak, and I can't imagine I'd be able to sit down and write in that state, and I can't imagine that I would get over it any time in the future. And considering this has happened to you now TWICE, and I completely feel your anger. I'm angry FOR you. I want to kill these people, because you are absolutely brilliant, and you deserve respect. I don't care what people say about mockery being the highest form of flattery; this isn't flattery. This is stealing, and it's disrespectful, and it's wrong. And I am so, so sorry it's happened to you.

    I hope that, eventually, you will feel well enough to come back to these stories, and you won't let these--for lack of a better word--bitches hinder the creative genius you share with us. You have such a loyal fanbase, and we all love you and your characters and your amazing mind. So here's hoping that you'll return to us, but understanding if you choose not to. And again, if I could destroy these people, I would. Because as I've said before, you're the reason I'm on Mibba. You've inspired me more than once, and you're the author that always makes me smile when I find an updated chapter.

    *hugs*
    August 13th, 2010 at 03:56am
  • doyleangel

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    Nervous Jack is adorable. Really, any Jack is adorable because he's just, well...Jack lol.
    Although angry sleeping with groupies to prove a point Jack isn't so adorable, but I think he learned his mistake with that one. Plus, it made it possible for him an Zooey to happen!
    August 12th, 2010 at 10:13pm
  • corrineftw.

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    This was absolutely adorable. Jack seems like the kind of guy to sort of be a nervous wreck in situations like this, and sort of dorky :) And Jack wearing glasses is ALWAYS a plus. He looks good in them!

    The part about Jack making the mistake in the past of which house to knock on was hilarious. At first I was like, "Who the hell is Giorgio?" xD So funny.

    When Jack gave Zooey the flowers and just stuck his hand out without saying anything sort of reminded me of the scene in Charlie Bartlett when Charlie's "business partner" goes to the door of his crush's house with the flowers and just shoves them in her face. So adorkable.

    I'm excited to read the next chapter when you post it!!
    August 8th, 2010 at 09:56pm
  • We Blame BDales.

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    HES SO CUTE

    SHES SO CUTE

    I LOVE THEM BOTH.
    I loved hearing the Jenna story too, and I loved how RiDaw was in there too!! :) Love this story so much.
    CANT WAIT FOR THEIR FIRST DATE CHAPTER (:

    p.s. Jack in glasses is the cutest thing ever besides Jack and Alex snuggling.
    August 7th, 2010 at 09:20pm
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    that was pretty funny reading about Jack freaking out, Rian Dawson to the rescue! Rian could have saved that relationship cuz Jack could have stood there for hours figuring out what to wear and missed the date and Zooey might get pissed and not give him another chance. but those are just a bunch of what ifs and they didnt happen s it doesnt matter.

    and i think glasses are cute on a guy, well depending on the guy but according to that picture Jack can definetly pull them off :), and with that picture i always thought i was imagining the earring but i guess i wasnt and i wish i was.

    any ways i lurved it and im dying to read the date :) update super soon please
    August 6th, 2010 at 06:04pm
  • ShutUpChristine

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    HAHA! Jack freaking out was like the best ever, haha. And calling Ri Ri to help him out? Even better. Lmao!
    And you got the picture from Twitter! Lol, he posted that picture like about a week ago or something.

    Oh, and I hope they're first date goes well! Can't wait for me :D

    Update soon!<3
    August 6th, 2010 at 12:02pm
  • mmmxalright

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    I love them.
    Yellow is my favorite color too :)
    Jack is super adorable.
    Good chapter!
    August 6th, 2010 at 05:11am
  • NerdGlasses

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    Gosh this story is AMAZING! I really mean it. The storyline is adorable and the waitress, she's so very well portrayed. I really have the feeling that she could be Jack's type although I don't even know him. And you know what, I like it so much that I can't help but be a little jealous and wish that the exact same thing would happen to me in real life.
    August 6th, 2010 at 12:42am
  • unraveled.words

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    Bahaha Jack freaking out is fantastic! I love the amount of time and effort he puts into making his first date as perfect as possible - I can't wait to find out how it goes. And I like how you made him anxious - especially after mentioning his past relationship with Jenna. It will be interesting to see how this plays out. Can't wait for the next update!
    August 5th, 2010 at 10:11pm
  • konfusion.

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    OH MY GOD. YOU DID NOT JUST QUOTE FERRIS BUELLER. I FUCKING LOVE YOU. Haha sorry couldn't resist- that movie is seriously the best thing of life. I've probably seen it like 50 times ;)

    Anyways this story is still too adorable for words I love how non-awkward and 'made for each other' Jack and Zooey are. Keep it up, I can't wait to read more!

    (oh on a side note I couldnt help but check out your pictures from warped, I'm so envious that you got to see so many bands. It looked like a shitload of fun :) )
    August 4th, 2010 at 01:36am
  • We Blame BDales.

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    ALL I ASK IS THAT YOU MAKE AN OLD JACK STORY SHOUT OUT AND TAKE HER TO THE WAFFLE NO- FRENCH TOAST PLACE FOR A THROWBACK JACK MOMENT ID LOVE YOU FOREVER.

    This story makes me happier than a scene kid luvs der Herro Kit+y. <3
    August 3rd, 2010 at 06:54am
  • doyleangel

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    Oh, and question. A couple actually. Is Zooey's name pronounced like Zoe? And if so, is it ok if I use that name in one of my stories? I just really like it
    August 2nd, 2010 at 06:03pm
  • doyleangel

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    Aw, Jack is so adorable, can't wait to call a girl. I felt a little bad for Alex when Jack made that comment, but sometimes you gotta live with what you do.

    I'm excited for their date!
    August 2nd, 2010 at 06:03pm
  • mmmxalright

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    Aw Jack :)
    I'm so excited for their first date.
    It's going to be adorable.
    August 2nd, 2010 at 04:45pm
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    Jack and Alex are such girls sometimes...

    i am really excited for their date, thats gonna be fun to read :)
    August 2nd, 2010 at 04:20pm