I Want Someone to Love Me for Who I Am - Comments

This was nice, despite the fact that the JB aren't really my cup of tea; I enjoyed this. I mean, they all could have been just your original characters and I still could understand what was going on. That's awesome.

Nice job :) keep it up!

Like many, many others I don't really know much about Nick Jonas, though I suppose you don't need to know much for this. I do believe the title is ripped from one of his songs, though I could be wrong.

I already knew by the vacant look on her face what she was about to do.
I think of what she was about to do would flow better.

“Why ?”
There's an unneeded space.

You continue to do that throughout, there doesn't need to be a space between the last letter and the question mark.

I find it a tad strange that one minute he's in love with the Bri girl (well, at least has some feelings as you said he appearaed geniunly hurt) but then loves this girl the next. I think it would go nicer if there was some time in between.

Otherwise you've got that cute-story aspect to this, one that people like to read and go "Aww". As everyone else said, it's sweet, and you were able to manipulate it into something worth reading.
:)

I'm not a huge fan of the Jonas Brothers, but this plotline was so cute. I mean, you don't have to know anything about the Jonas Brothers to understand it.

I'm not a fan of the Jonas Brothers at all, but this was too cute to pass up. I was aww-ing the entire time I was reading it and the ending made me smile (:
Lovely job! <3

I'm not a big fan of the Jonas Brothers - but, you're writing definitely made up for it. [:

This was just so adorable - it made me smile at the end.
You have loads of talent, dearie.
Wonderful job! (:

That was really good. A lot of writers, like myself, can only work with simple scenes. This was a lot to explain, but your description and dialogue were balanced perfectly.
Nice:)

She said that nick was on the 6th floor in room 13
^ Nick isn't capitalized here.

I'm being honest when I say I'm not one for Jonas Fan-Fics. I'm also being honest when I say I thought this was pretty sweet.

Like Broadway said, the fact that his blood sugar sent him to the hospital was a little farfetched. But in a way, him being the hopsital, kind of fit in this story. I liked the way you continuously built up--somewhat awkwardly in places--to the moment where she does finally tell him she loves him.

I liked the detail you put into this and I also like the idea of childhood(?) friends turning into loves. All in all, this was pretty sweet. (:

I don't listen to the Jonas Brothers, but this was a sweet little romance story. The only thing that really confused me about this was his diabetes coming on like a panic attack when he's upset. Wouldn't it be easier to just say he had a panic attack? Someone in the lime light like him would probably be at least brought in for check up if they collapsed on national television.

But, like I said, that's the only thing that really confused me. Other than that it was a very nice story.

Don't really read Jonas Brothers stuff but I gotta admit I love the fluff! Plus you did a good job with it.

I'm not a fan of the Jonas Brothers.
But this is a nice story.
It was real cute and fluffy :3

The only thing that bugged me was:
“Nick, don’t. You need to watch your blood sugar.”
I get that stress does affect your blood sugar, it seems a little farfetched to me that it was enough to send a guy to the hospital. Maybe it'd raise it slightly, but like I said, it seems a little much that it sent him to the hospital.

:"Joe ? Joe who ?” Nick demanded. I hated to see the look on his face.

“Your brother Joe.”

When I read that, I thought oh crap on a cracker!! Ugh! how could Joe date her? I didn't like that girl. That was rude.
Okay, this was abosolutly adorable! I loved it! :D He gets the girl and Taira gets him! :D Great job!

I don't like the Jonas brothers at all.
But seriously, I love the writing of this.
It's a cute plotline, with an awesome writer behind it.
Wonderful.

I was so scared when he collapsed I was about to run out of my door.
Lol
cc:
<3

Amazing!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW so cute. amazing, absolutly adorable love love love it!!! ♥♥♥ you should continue this. you could have sooo much drama in here!!!! it would be awesome and i would soo read it :)

AWWWWWWWWW!!!!<3333 that was so cute!!!!! Bri is a bitch for breaking up with Nick! I mean HELLO!!! It's NICK FREAKING JONAS!!! hehe omfg I was like O_O Nick! When he fell and it cut to commerical break. Then I was like GO GET YOUR MAN GIRL!!! lolz it was freaking amazing ma supermagepartyninja buddy =) NINJA&&VAMPIRE POWER!!! XD

Briiiii! I love itttt! :D!
That was amazing ^___^
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