October 6th, 2013 at 06:46pm
Hold up My Heart - Comments
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great story but u have the description of the ecstasy wrong lol it lasts for 12 hours and u get super horny xD but other than that its an amazing story so farOctober 5th, 2013 at 08:33pm
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You might want to change the status to 'complete' :)September 28th, 2011 at 12:04am
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this is beyond amazing. incredible. Marvelous. I've read every single chapter today. You must update. They are so cute together<3August 24th, 2011 at 09:29pm
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Thank you so much :DJuly 27th, 2011 at 08:48pm
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This was amazing ! I didnt want to close the story ! I absolutely loved it ! Amazing job ! So glad you didnt choose to kill it ! ;D & so sorry to hear about your grandma, i hope shes okay !July 25th, 2011 at 07:50am
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Thank you!July 16th, 2011 at 04:21am
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I love this story! And I'm only on chapter 8! But don't worry,I'm a quick reader and pretty might catch up with everyone else.But anyways,I love it,and thank God I subscribed it! Can't wait for your update!
And to let you know,I'm sorta of a spoiler when it come's to good stories!! Sorry,I just love this to much that I could'nt wait to find out what happens next! Slash,I love the main charecters name,its so,I don't know...stylish?
Lol,but anyways,as mentioned before,Update soon! :)July 14th, 2011 at 05:58am -
Yay Jake's ok :)July 14th, 2011 at 02:01am
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Thank you guys, sooo much.
<3July 14th, 2011 at 12:10am -
it was short but verry sweet =) adorable chapter <3July 13th, 2011 at 08:03pm
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So cute, I loved it(:
You make the best stories <3July 13th, 2011 at 07:51pm -
ohhh it's beautiful! I love those cheesy chapters! No offense!July 13th, 2011 at 06:44pm
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I liked the end :)
It was simple and sweet ^.^
Great story :DJuly 13th, 2011 at 06:38am -
Thank you dollface! :D
<3July 10th, 2011 at 12:35am -
Woahhh! This is intense! I had a feeling that he'd turn up to be a vamp but the whole hybrid thing caught me wayy offgaurd, which is great! I didn't expect it at all! Great past two chapters and I can't wait until the next... Even if it's the last :(July 9th, 2011 at 08:44pm
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Oooooh My God...
What happened?! lol
I'm on the edge of my seat!! :O
Well, on the edge of my bed x)
Anyways, great update and I hope you update soon!
Keep the awesome chapters comin' (;
<3July 8th, 2011 at 09:39am -
hahaha thank you guys. <3July 7th, 2011 at 10:16pm
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nnnooo dont kill jacob!!!! lol
brilliant chapter!! very dramatic and evil cliffhanger!hahaJuly 7th, 2011 at 02:08pm -
Aww i hope Jacob's going to be ok.
And i'm a little sad that this was the second to last chapter :(
Update soon :)
Please.July 7th, 2011 at 03:40am
Frankly, I don't really care because this is fiction, and it's my story.
But thanks.